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    Post by theBOSS. on Mon Nov 12 2007, 22:33

    uh...wsup? Yeah, I'm just going to write this similar the way I would write for FFN, so please... laugh all you want. I'm a mediocre writer anyway.
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    S u r p r i s e s (A SasuSaku oneshot)

    In which she surprises him by understanding his monosyllabic language, and he in turn actually shows some chivalry.
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    He growled inwardly, flicking his wet bangs out of his eyes. Sure, he was strong. He was a prodigy. He was the number 1 genin out of his graduating class. Now, at 18, he was a world-reknowned jounin listed in ever possible bingo book imaginable to the human race.

    He was Uchiha Sasuke.

    So why was he wading in dirty, slimy sewer water on a pathetic D-rank mission that even a genin could complete without any problems?

    To top it all off, he was stuck with her. The girl that kept on chattering endlessly with her stupid talk. Sure, she was a respected kunoichi everywhere she went. She had killer looks and dangerous strength (literally).

    She was Haruno Sakura.

    And she was also giving him a headache.

    "I mean, look at this! Why'd they send jounin to clean out sewers?! Even genin can do that."

    Okay, sometimes he agreed with her -

    "God, the stench is going to stay for at least a couple of weeks, think of how airheaded the Pig's going to be..."

    - and sometimes she just needed to shut up. Seriously.

    "I'm missing valuable training with Tsunade-shishou..."

    Yes, he could be kicking Naruto's butt to kingdom come but -

    "... and today was supposed to be movie night with the girls! Just my luck!"

    Well... he was going to say he was missing valuable training and... training.

    See what he meant? She distracted him. He picked up some sewer slime with a grimace and tossed it in the oversized garbage bag he was given.

    "Sasuke-kun, are you even listening?"

    "Hn." Yes. The answer came out of his mouth automatically.

    "Tch. Doesn't seem like it." She stopped picking up garbage from within the polluted water for a moment to glare at him.

    He blinked. She actually thought it meant yes... which was.... surprisingly... correct.

    "Sasuke-kun," A hand was waved in front of his face. "You're spacing out."

    "Hn." I am not. Uchiha Sasuke does not space out. He goes into deep thought.

    "Yes you are, Sasuke-kun. I'm a medic."

    He stared blankly at her. "Hn...." What does that have to do with anything?

    She rolled his eyes, as if she were explaining to him the fundementals of the shinobi code of conduct. "I can observe your eye movement."

    "Hn." Whatever. Get back to work.

    "Che. Just saying..." She glared at him for a moment before going back to stabbing floating garbage with a kunai and shoving it in the garbage bag.

    She really did fascinate him. The only person that could understand his monosyllabic language was the Hyuuga because both (kind of) shared the same language.

    But... her of all people...

    Still, she was a smart and sharp kunoichi from the beginning.

    "I'm just smart like that, Sasuke-kun."

    His head snapped up, eyes narrowing as her own eyes twinkled.

    Maybe she was psychic. Maybe that Yamanaka girl taught her some mind jutsu, and with her perfect chakra control she was able to pull it off.

    "No, I'm not psychic Sasuke-kun."

    He blinked. "Hn." Whatever...

    She merely smiled mysteriously. "Whatever you say, Sasuke-kun... Whatever you say."

    That Haruno Sakura was something alright, understanding his monosyllabic language. She surprised him.

    He went back to wondering and doing his job.

    And for two high-ranking jounin, they didn't notice the small ripples in the water...


    ...until the snake struck, biting Sakura right above her knee.

    She yelped, dropping her kunai right on top of the snake's head. Thin, blood-coated fangs came out from her right knee and the snake dropped into the water with a small splash.

    "Ow..." She squeezed at the skin above the bite, and blood oozed out of the two small holes.

    "Stay still."

    She looked up in surprise at the Uchiha, whose eyebrows were creased in concentration.

    He picked her up by the waist almost effortlessly, placing her on the narrow ledge at the edge of the sewer.

    Then what he did next actually made her wonder if this was the same Uchiha Sasuke she had stalked many years ago.

    He grabbed her knee, squeezed some more blood out (she winced), brought his lips near the bite, and started sucking at the blood.

    Her eyes widened and her face reddened as he lifted his head and spat some blood out. "S-Sasuke-kun..."

    He made eye contact with her for a split second before resuming what he was doing. "Hn." Shut up.

    Being the obedient kunoichi she was, she remained quiet.

    Surprise! Uchiha Sasuke finally melts and shows some chivalry!

    Wait until she told the Pig about this.

    When he was done, he wiped some blood from off the corner of his lips. "Hn..." That's disgusting.

    "Sasuke-kun..."

    He looked down at his partner for the mission because he was at least a head taller than her. "Hn." What.

    "Thank you..." Shyly she reached out and wiped some near-dry blood from his cheekbone.

    "Hn." Yeah, you're welcome.

    After all, when would Uchiha Sasuke ever act like this again? Never.

    "But you know..."

    "Hn." What is it?








    "That snake... it wasn't poisonous."
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Nov 12 2007, 22:48

    it was interesting in the middle. The ending sentence was funny that the snake wasn't poisonous.I give u a 7.

    Are u gonna comtinue it?
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by theBOSS. on Tue Nov 13 2007, 08:52

    nah, it was a oneshot. but... maybe... because I already have a FFN site I need to update... dunno, why, got any requests?
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by rocknrolljunkie989 on Tue Nov 13 2007, 20:39

    I liked it. I give you an 8.
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by theBOSS. on Tue Nov 13 2007, 21:27

    lol

    you kidding me? i'm really bad at writing... -____-;;; typed this up in about ten minutes because I was bored, but then my mom told me to get off the comptuer...
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    The first Alice was a courageous red one
    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by D-Dei on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:25

    lol deathy :D

    funny

    hm.. i wonder if i can understand your language now ^^
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:26

    hn.

    i've done better. i'm thinking of changing this into an anthology
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    The first Alice was a courageous red one
    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Re: Surprises

    Post by D-Dei on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:26

    or not...

    smaller words..
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:27

    ...a oneshot collection.
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    The first Alice was a courageous red one
    With a Sword in one hand through Wonderland
    She cut down, many things that stood in her way
    Making a path that was a trail of blood
    The alice walked deep into the woods and then she was trapped
    A prisoned sinner
    There was no way of knowing she was there
    Except the red path that followed behind her

    The second Alice was a calm, blue one
    Singing a song that filled wonderland
    The false notes which he sang till the end
    Created a crazy world in wonderland
    That Alice was born of a Flower
    Was then shot by a cross-eyed man
    Out from the wound then bloomed a flower
    Everyone that had loved him, soon began to die

    The third Alice was an innocent green one
    A beautiful figure there in wonderland
    She had fooled many people to do her bid
    A strange country was then created up
    The Alice was the queen of the country
    Possessed by a dream of distortion
    Afraid of losing her life to death
    Ruling the country of hers forever

    Walking down a red path in the forest
    Under the blue rose trees, the two had tea time
    An invitation to them from the castle was
    The playing card of hearts

    The fourth Alice was a pair of children twins
    They were curious througout the wonderland
    They traveled through the doors to see all kinds of things
    From there wandering that they had just arrived
    A stubborn big sister, and smart little brother

    They were nearing the first alice's wonderland
    The two were to never to wake from their dream
    The twins then wandered through wonderland endlessly!

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    Post by D-Dei on Sat Dec 08 2007, 15:28

    ok, sure then... -0-;;
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    Post by Kazekage*Gaara on Wed Feb 20 2008, 23:54

    Yay! I love it! SasuSaku is simply amazing!
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Feb 21 2008, 06:57

    That was funny! rofl

    Uchiha had to suck out the blood from her knee
    XD XD

    GREAT TORTURE!!!!!!

    9!
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Feb 21 2008, 09:15

    o__O

    I thought I deleted this story.
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    Post by Kazekage*Gaara on Thu Feb 21 2008, 12:27

    Thank God you didn't!
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    Re: Surprises

    Post by theBOSS. on Thu Feb 21 2008, 12:31

    ^-^;;;

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