When I'm Asleep.

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    Little_Shiro
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    When I'm Asleep.

    Post by Little_Shiro on Mon Nov 08 2010, 20:28

    Cross the border into hell,
    Whats that feeling, whats that smell?
    Burning feeling, stabbing pains,
    Just the thought makes me insane.
    The day my mind filled up with doubt,
    Not a sound to block it out.
    All the screams inside my head,
    Ripping through my sanity thread.
    Blood stained walls, A mothers scream,
    This is my minds happest scene.
    There is worse, ohh if u could see,
    The f***ed up thoughts inside of me.
    Bloody husband, Bloody wife,
    A bloody man with a bloody knife.
    Who was cause to all this pain?
    Doesn't matter were all insane.
    Lies been told, Hearts been broke,
    Run and hide your little joke.
    Whats the point, whats the matter?
    Doesn't your attempts just make u sadder?
    Face your fears or run away,
    We will all die anyway.
    Who will cry? Whos tears will creep?
    If I should die, While I'm asleep.
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    Re: When I'm Asleep.

    Post by Little_Shiro on Mon Nov 08 2010, 20:54

    I was really sad o - o
    Sorry xD
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    Re: When I'm Asleep.

    Post by quater on Mon Nov 08 2010, 21:15

    This was kind of creepy.
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    Re: When I'm Asleep.

    Post by Banouin on Mon Nov 08 2010, 22:03

    quater wrote:This was kind of creepy.
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    Re: When I'm Asleep.

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Nov 08 2010, 22:12

    Little_Shiro wrote:I was really sad o - o
    Sorry xD

    Sorry? Sorry! Apologies are not needed for anguish! (Although Splendid would be much preferable)

    Would you like to talk about it?
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    Re: When I'm Asleep.

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Nov 08 2010, 23:15

    somewhat creepy and dark poem but i somewhat liked the flow of it.interesting shiro
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    Re: When I'm Asleep.

    Post by Little_Shiro on Thu Nov 11 2010, 00:11

    Thanks Cris ;3
    And no thanks Titan I'm good now~

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