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    OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:21

    OmniPotent ARTS

    Chapter I: The Decisive Battle

    Two shadowy figures stand tall in a square ring. Panting heavily, gasping for air, each holding a different part of their body. One figure holding his arm, the other figure holding his rib. The sunlight beams through the dark clouds and the faces of each fighter become clear. It is Quater and Punkfilter. These two fighters were the last direct students of Aikido. Punkfilter fell off the path of righteousness while training. Since then, him and Q always had different thoughts on how WOTN should be run. Each time they got together, their differences led to a conflict resulting in a fight. However, each time they fought, something always stopped one from finishing the other. This time it was different, neither of them would let anything stop them from finally settling this age old debate. Q stood tall and let go of his arm. He wiped the blood from under his lip and grinned at Punkfilter. PF unclenched his rib and started walking towards Q slowly. As he approached, Q got into a defensive stance and eagerly awaited the next attack. PF smiled wide and rushed at Q. He began throwing coordinated punches and kicks, all of which Q blocked with ease. PF never gave up, his attack was relentless but the massive amount of attacks resulted in low power for each strike. Q began to see what PF was doing. He was using low power attacks and maximum quality to wear on his energy. PF was always the fighter with more stamina, Q was always the one with more mental capacity.

    Q soon realized he couldnt put up with much more of this. His eyes started to follow every strike instead of staring into PFs eyes. Each strike seemed to slow down and Q was finally able to see an opening. As PFs next punch came in, Q dodged to the side and grabbed PFs hand, he swung it around his and brought it to the back of PF causing PF to bend down in pain. Q had him in a standard arm bar. One false move and PFs arm would snap. He ached out in pain as Q took a breather. PF turned his head and looked at Q with a wince.

    You do realize, you can only hold this position for so long before I counter and kill you. You were always the suck-up. You never took charge, you were and still are a softy Q. Be a man like me, do something. DO SOMETHING!

    Q grinned at PFs harsh words. In a sense, he was right, Q always followed procedure and standards whether they be harsh and unruly. Still, Q wouldnt let those words get into his head. He shook it off and applied more pressure to the armbar causing PF to scream out in pain. The clouds above started to swirl. They became dark and the sun was soon eclipsed by what looked like impending rain. The echo of PFs scream travels for miles. Once again, PF gasped and looked at Q.

    Listen to me you FOOL! You are worthless, give up now and I promise to kill you slowly. When I left the dojo, I became more diverse and powerful. The only reason you are still alive is because I pity you. You cant even become what I am. Just GIVE U

    Before PF could finish his sentence, Q jerked his arm forward and put him into a choke hold. PF began gasping for breath. Q knew holding pressure on the carotid artery for 10 seconds would cause him to pass out. But that wasnt his intention. Q wanted to end it now. He couldnt take it. The words from PF banging around in his head. Was he right? Was Q just a lowly follower? NO! Q squeezed harder on PFs neck. Rain started to drip down on them. PF looked up and smiled, he was never happier to see such a beautiful sight. It was like he always imagined, a duel to the death with rain and thundering clouds above. He wouldnt go out this easily. With the rain now down pouring, Qs grip became more lucid. PF took this split second to jerk his head back into Qs with nasty force causing Q to let go and stumble back holding his nose. Blood began to drip from his nose as PF fell to the ground coughing harshly.

    Q ran at PF again, but this time PF was prepared, his looked back at Q closing in and swept his foot across the ground. Q stumbled over the sweep and began to fall right at PF. PF grinned largely and jerked up his elbow. Qs throat fell right onto the elbow and he immediately coughed up blood. As Q slid off PFs elbow, PF grabbed him by the throat and lifted him into the air as he stood up. The thunder and rain made PF enjoy this moment all the more. Q grabbed onto PFs arms and tried struggling free, but no use. PF tightened his grip and began laughing maniacally. Q felt the pressure on his neck tighten as his airway began to narrow more and more. He looked at PF with one eye closed wincing in pain. PF continued to laugh and then threw his foot up cracking Q on the side of the face sending him flying to the other side of the arena. Q struggled to his knees panting for oxygen. His trembling hand reached the side of his face, he felt a wetness unlike the rain. He looked at his hand, it was full of blood. Qs eyes began to get hazy, his vision was being distorted. PF slammed his temporal lobe. Q knew this wasnt good. Without proper vision, his martial arts were all but useless. He saw with blurry vision, PF walking casually over to him. Q tried to stand but fell back to his knees. PF was now standing over him. The rain was hitting him hard. He stood tall like a god. Q looked up and smirked.

    So is this how it will end? You will kill me and take control over the land. You know as well as I, you dont have the mental capacity to control WOTN.

    These words enraged PF as he dug his foot into Qs stomach. Q fell over gripping his stomach. His thoughts were now all but blank. The only thing he could make out was PFs angry face. The rain soon became a distant sound in his ear. PF became more of a shadow in his eyes. Everything seemed almost like a dream now. Q saw himself as a child training with his master. PF was there too. Was this a reconciled flashback? Q continued to watch what was happening. He saw him and PF laughing together before the split. Their master yelling at them to pay attention and focus. After about 15 minutes, the session was over. PF ran towards the dojo but Q stayed where he was. He continued to practice his moves as his master looked over him. Soon, his master came over to him and kneeled down to his level. He looked Q in the eyes and told him something.

    Remember Q, no matter how big the enemy, no matter how strong they are, you always control the outcome of the battle. Never let defeat hang over you as the only option. Remember this, for it will help you someday.

    Those words began to echo everywhere as Q snapped back into reality. PF was still standing over him speaking but Q couldnt hear a word. That sentence keep repeating over and over again. Q shifted his eyes all around looking for anyway to turn this battle. He then saw it. With PF being smug and arrogant Q saw he wasnt paying attention to his center of gravity. Q inhaled and then exhaled all the breath he had, with that burst of energy, he kicked PF right below his kneecap behind his leg, PFs leg buckled and he fell instantly. Q inhaled and exhaled again taking every burst of energy to coordinate his moves. He threw his open palm at PFs head causing PFs neck to snap back. Q then swept his forearm across PFs throat. PF grasped his throat gasping for air and Q flipped over him and threw a knee into his kidney. PF doubled over grabbing his ribs. Q threw his hands across PFs neck and grasped tightly. He moved closer to PFs ear.

    Dont you ever underestimate your opponent. Master taught us that. Im sorry but it ends here.

    With those words passing through PFs head, Q shed a tear that rolled down his bloody, wet face. As the tear streamed down his face, a large crunching sound was head. Q clenched his hands and ripped them to the left snapping PFs neck in a split second. The tear fell from his cheek onto the ground. The rain was still coming down heavy as Q let PF drop to the floor slowly. He closed PFs eyes with his fingers and stood tall. The blood on the side of his face has stopped streaming and the rain poured over him. For the first time, Q felt as if the rain washed away all the pain PF has caused him and this world. It was over now. Q looked around the arena. Broken stone, tree debris everywhere, this truly was the final confrontation. Q began to slowly walk away from the now deceased PF. He must return to the 4-obelisk tower and prepare a speech. It was his time to govern the masses.
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Toshii on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:38

    whoa really awesome des :D like the story so far~ keep up teh good work ^^
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:39

    you know i will!
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    Post by Toshii on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:40

    hooray! Oh Yeah!
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:40

    I didn't read it yet but there are a lot of large paragraphs.
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:40

    when is your next chapter coming out
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:41

    well read it silly keya
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:42

    It makes my head hurt! I'm gonna have to copy it onto a wordpad and slice it up!
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Toshii on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:43

    Destinykil wrote:when is your next chapter coming out

    erm...will the most i worked on SOL is the notes and not the actually story xD and i have chapter 11 typed but not edited. you know what thanks for reminding me, i'll do that now :] and finish chapter 12 ^^

    lol keya XD
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:43

    aww okie
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    Post by Toshii on Sat Sep 04 2010, 00:48

    khferjhlkcvfnvkMAH SIG D<

    but yeah :D
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by quater on Sat Sep 04 2010, 02:34

    That was interesting. Good place to start it at the end of Punkfilter. Let's see how this goes dude.
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    Re: OmniPotent Arts

    Post by Destinykil on Sat Sep 04 2010, 02:38

    whoot thanks Q
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    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Sat Sep 04 2010, 17:55

    I'm liking it so far, Des! It seems like it's gonna be a cool story :P
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    Post by Envy'sWrath on Sat Sep 04 2010, 19:10

    I like it its really good.

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