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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    Wind

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Jul 29 2010, 05:43

    The sun shining in my eyes
    I found in the wind of my surprise
    Your warm character shifts my mind
    lets stop now and forget the times
    The smile you hold is the one I only know
    I hear your heart beat as one in a flow
    The laughter you hold gives me butterflies
    spreading through my veins out through my breath into the night sky

    Your so very special, my blue eyed wonder
    with your surfer looks that could make anyone stutter
    Patient like the calming ocean
    serene beauty within the tides of those blue eyes
    Our minds think so much alike
    Emotionally drawn to you like the wind and night sky

    Like the wind you drifted through but left your footprint
    Stained in my heart like fresh ink
    As I write this poem you no know you're the wind who picked me up
    I hope you won't let me go
    Your blues eyes seek sincerity
    They speak happiness enveloped in warmth
    in one amazing stare...no one compares
    Addictive like no other
    you draw me back wanting more

    I feel we lose it all
    embarrassment in every smile
    Perfection is nothing that I seek from you
    only a man who's dear and true
    Through my mind I was drawn to you like the ocean
    Just as you were somehow drawn to me through the wind
    Your all that I think about
    as the moon rises along the ocean I look
    for you as I wait for the wind and listen
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    Re: Wind

    Post by Banouin on Sat Jul 31 2010, 06:27

    Hmm~
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    Re: Wind

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 31 2010, 07:11

    thats a mikel comment lol, but atleast u commented :P
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    Re: Wind

    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Sat Jul 31 2010, 09:10

    I like this one, Cris ^_^
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jul 31 2010, 10:36

    thanks clair~
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    Re: Wind

    Post by Toshii on Sat Jul 31 2010, 16:41

    yay for another great poem~ Oh Yeah!

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