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    Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Jun 07 2010, 16:46

    I trecked through the dark Rainy woods hoping to find shelter soon. ~why did I have to yell at her? now I have map no guide back home.. Curse my sense of direction~. I keep walking for a while yet, when I see a light off in the distance I rush towards it hoping it might be a home or at least a caravan. But what I see is not a caravan or a house but a Burning village and bandits running about slaughtering the poor people I stand there frozen not knowing what I should do. "Heh heh well well well looks like we have ourselves a little stray..", a Deep gravely voice said above me. I turn and look up. ~A bandit...~ I instantly knew I was in danger but I couldnt move out of sheer terror of the scarred man above me. " Girly what is your name? Tell me." He demaned. I debated on whether to tell him or not I chose the option that would most likely not get me Hurt. " Genta My name is Genta...", I replied softly. He smiled cruelly and grabbed my arm " Genta eh? what a beauitful Name for Boss's new servant girl..." He told me before he knocked me out.

    When I awoke I found myself on a marble floor. I looked up afraid cause I relized that the bandit wasnt a nightmare but a reality cause standing in front of me was him and another guy this one better dressed wearing black dress slacks and a leather jacket his light brown hair falling into his dark blue almost purple eyes. " Hmm your right Avaire she is pretty." He said as he walked closer to me. I just sat there watching him afraid of what he might do. He brough his hand up like he was going to slap me I closed my eyes prepared for the painful sting. What came instead shocked me he ws stroking my cheek with his thumb in an almost caring gesture. he stayed like that for a few minutes but then his demeaner changed. " She will make a fine Servant Take her away.." he said ripping his hand away leaving bleeding scratches on my cheek. The guy called Avaire started walking away pulling on the rope tied around me, I stumbled after him with one last glance at the mysterous Leader through the crack in the door.
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    chapter 2 will be up soon! R and R please!!
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by arashi ryu on Mon Jun 07 2010, 16:54

    nice^^
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Jun 07 2010, 16:56

    why thanks you might see a few chara's you know.
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by Toshii on Mon Jun 07 2010, 16:57

    cool nina.
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Jun 07 2010, 16:58

    thanks like I said its an attempt.
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by arashi ryu on Mon Jun 07 2010, 17:03

    oh what charas?
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Jun 07 2010, 17:22

    you'll have to wait for the next chapter.
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by arashi ryu on Mon Jun 07 2010, 17:24

    I see. you working on it now I'm guessing?
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Mon Jun 07 2010, 17:27

    You have a few spelling errors, and punctuation is a bit off... paragraphing is your friend :P
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Jun 07 2010, 21:15

    yeah. I was never the greatest checker but eh.
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by xXxsweetxmakikoxXx on Mon Jun 07 2010, 21:35

    Really good Nin
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    Re: Silver Halo and Dark wings

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Jun 07 2010, 22:08

    thanks

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