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    Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 21:40

    Chapter two: Mountain Vs Shadow: A Moment Of Silence.

    The hawk landed on the rock next to Q and pecked at the food that he had hung over the fire to cook. Q took the container that was strapped to the back of the bird and took out the document. Looking it over he smiled as he saw in a nice bold ink Bano's signature. A high jump in AMP energy sent the hawk running, Q understood it's fear. “Kurokage; Hikage. Having a nice night?” he asked. A split second latter both Death and Dei appeared out of thin air. Death's AMP was all over the place, almost like she was unable to control it. “What brings you two ladies out here in the middle of mountain territory?”
    “Hunting” The Kurokage's voice was full of anger and as fast as she was there, she was gone.
    “Aw, I was going to ask if she wanted to go fishing some time if she likes hunting!” Q sounded depressed. “How about you!?” he asked Dei hopeful.
    “I spend all my time around frozen water, why on earth would I want to spend what little free time I get with just water, besides.” Dei came around the fire and took a seat next to Q. “We are after a escaped convict that got out of high level shadow prison. he is strong, deadly, smart and insane. No time to fish.”
    “I hope Death finds them, but you know. There is something I need you to do for me!” Q said as he handed her the document and then setting up another two sticks of meat to cook over the fire for himself and Dei.
    - - -

    Darkflame sipped his tea surrounded by his friends as they chatted about there every day life. Parallel of him seat Toshii, who was so fixed on the maps laid out in front of her, she took a slow drink of her tea as she crossed out a small spot on the map shaking her head. She had taken up mapping the lands around the village so they could better understand them. Not that any of the mountain ninja needed it. They knew it all like the back of there own hands, it was also how Toshii now did it from memory alone.

    Next to her was October who pushed herself over Toshii's shoulder to look at the map. She put her finger at the lower right hand side “I think there is a rock there!”
    “Whats the point in marking rocks?” Darkflame questioned as Toshii ignored the stupid comment making another mark on the map. Zergio, who was next to Darkflame snickered as he finished his 'kick me' sign on Ninjakid's back, who was at the very end of the table next to him sleeping. Her tea cold as ice. “Maybe we should mark bunnies too, I hear they are evil after all” he commented, Toshii shot him a annoyed look. “We?” she asked folding up the maps and pushing them into her backpack beside her.

    Darkflame held his hand in the air signaling the nearby waitress. She rushed over with a friendly smile. “Can I help you?”
    “Can we get the bill?” Toshii asked.
    “You're kidding!” The waitress sounded shocked and horrified, she stumbled over herself dropping her pen. “You surely did not think we would charge any of you for just a small round of tea.” she went on bending over to fetch the pen. She came back up her smile back “It's on the house!”
    “At least let me pay for mine” Darkflame said pushing his hand into his pocket to get some gold.
    “No no.” The waitress fought back.
    “Just leave it as a tip” Zergio said in a hushed whisper as the waitress left to tend to another table.
    “You're right” Darkflame nodded leaving the few gold coins out on the table. Toshii pulled her backpack over her shoulder as she finished the last bit of her tea. “I'm going, time for a goodnight sleep.” the others followed her out saying there goodbyes to each other before heading home.

    - - -
    Darkflame let the chill of the night wash over him. His breath visible in the cold night air. He had wanted to go home for the night, but something did not feel right, something that pushed him unto the path he now walked. He felt as if he was following something evil. But as he rounded every corner, nothing was there. As he rounded the seventh corner a sharp pain in the center of his back crippled him and sent him to the ground.

    With his face half in the dirt Darkflame tried to move but the pain was to much for his body, he let out a yell of agony as another sharp pain came down on him.
    “I'm really sorry and all, I would have gave you a fighting chance, but when they find the other Ishi dead they will be looking for me.” came a cold evil voice as a dragger landed in the dirt beside Darkflame.
    “I think I'll choke the last one to death.” the voice went on with a laugh. Darkflame could see the mans legs as he walked past. “Maybe you'll get lucky and they will find you before you lose all your blood.” he called out.
    “W-wait.” Darkflame stuttered as he pushed himself up to his knees. “Who are you?” he went on, the taste of blood in his mouth.
    “Venomu” Venomu had turned back to see Darkflame on his knees. He was impressed, even more so when Darkflame found his strength and was again on his feet.
    “I'll make sure you die fast Venomu.”

    Adrenaline pumped throughout his body pushing Darkflame on as he rushed forward no real plan or fighting stance, throwing out all his teachings. He came at Venomu with a backhanded swing of his left arm only to have it blocked and countered with a kick to the gut followed up with a leg sweep sending Darkflame falling onto his back. A loud yell shot out of his lips as Venomu did not let up his attack bringing down his leg in a downward kick onto Darkflame's chest.
    “Man, can't you just die.” Venomu spat, his tone like poison as he pushed down on Darkflame's chest with his foot.

    His body told him to give up, that he was done for, but in his mind Darkflame was unable to accept it. He dug his left hand into the earth without Venomu seeing and with a quick sharp movement a pillar of earth shot out from behind Venomu hitting him dead on sending him flying. Darkflame rolled over pushing both hands into the earth.
    “I'll die...when you do” he laughed as blood poured from his mouth. He no longer cared about the outcome as long as his enemy was lifeless before him.

    Another pillar came from under Venomu before he had time to recover sending him into the air, Darkflame's left hand shot out of the earth, a boulder attached to it. Using AMP energy, he sent it flying right at Venomu having it smash into him. Venomu came crashing back down to the ground and was motionless.

    - - -

    The Kurokage stood over the dead body of Zergio, she could feel the AMP in the air, only a thing a Kage could do. She was close, spikes of AMP energy were going off just on the other side of the village. Her eyes turned fully black as if soulless as she rushed to save a slowly dying Darkflame.

    - - -

    Darkflame was not shocked when Venomu got back up to his feet with a smile but it did not stop him from sending two more pillars at him. Both were easily evaded as Venomu jumped on the last one and took a massive leap at Darkflame coming in with a roundhouse kick to his face uprooting him from the ground and sending him into the building to his right. He crashed into the wall and slid to the ground.

    - - -
    Time seemed to stop for Darkflame as the world slowed down. His breathing became harder and harder and the faces of his friends flashed in his mind. The world became silent and his vision burly. The last thing he could make out was the Kurokage looking down at him
    “I'm sorry.” she muttered, but Darkflame did not hear it, his eyes had closed, his last breaths leaving his body. The Kurokage pulled off her robe and used it as a blanket for him. Darkflame could feel what little warmth the robe gave. The last moment of his life had been one of comfort, even if no one knew. The empty silence and bit of warmth made him smile as the last bit of air left him. His mind going blink and his body lifeless.

    Death turned on Venomu ready to put a end to him.


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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Toshii on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:05

    nuuuuu gio and sensei died D:>

    but yay i'm in it!
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:10

    I seem to kick ass.
    Therefore, I give the post a plus sign D<
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:11

    Toshii wrote:nuuuuu gio and sensei died D:>

    but yay i'm in it!

    Nuuuuuuuuuuuu~ I did try to make Df epic and have him die like man ^_^
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:12

    Another great chapter, love ^_^
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:14

    death wrote:I seem to kick ass.
    Therefore, I give the post a plus sign D<

    I was just about to ask who did that ^_^
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by dark_Raptor on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:15

    SuperSpecialAwesome!
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:17

    CLAIRVOYANTdisease wrote:Another great chapter, love ^_^


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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:17

    Banouin wrote:
    death wrote:I seem to kick ass.
    Therefore, I give the post a plus sign D<

    I was just about to ask who did that ^_^
    -narcissistic attitude-
    Anything with my kicking ass in it deserves to be noticed D<
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:17

    dark_Raptor wrote:SuperSpecialAwesome!

    Any word on when the next part to your story will be up Dr rap~?
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:18

    death wrote:
    Banouin wrote:
    death wrote:I seem to kick ass.
    Therefore, I give the post a plus sign D<

    I was just about to ask who did that ^_^
    -narcissistic attitude-
    Anything with my kicking ass in it deserves to be noticed D<

    ^_^ Haha, I will make sure to make you epic-full in the next chapter.
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Toshii on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:22

    Banouin wrote:
    Toshii wrote:nuuuuu gio and sensei died D:>

    but yay i'm in it!

    Nuuuuuuuuuuuu~ I did try to make Df epic and have him die like man ^_^

    awww :D

    will you make me full of epicness? :o
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:23

    Toshii wrote:
    Banouin wrote:
    Toshii wrote:nuuuuu gio and sensei died D:>

    but yay i'm in it!

    Nuuuuuuuuuuuu~ I did try to make Df epic and have him die like man ^_^

    awww :D

    will you make me full of epicness? :o

    Tbh~ You will have no where to go but up. So yeah~ I'm sure you will be full of epic~
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by dark_Raptor on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:25

    Banouin wrote:
    dark_Raptor wrote:SuperSpecialAwesome!

    Any word on when the next part to your story will be up Dr rap~?
    Hopefully--- in an hour and half or so.
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:26

    dark_Raptor wrote:
    Banouin wrote:
    dark_Raptor wrote:SuperSpecialAwesome!

    Any word on when the next part to your story will be up Dr rap~?
    Hopefully--- in an hour and half or so.

    Dude! Yes! Jake
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Toshii on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:28

    Banouin wrote:
    Toshii wrote:
    Banouin wrote:
    Toshii wrote:nuuuuu gio and sensei died D:>

    but yay i'm in it!

    Nuuuuuuuuuuuu~ I did try to make Df epic and have him die like man ^_^

    awww :D

    will you make me full of epicness? :o

    Tbh~ You will have no where to go but up. So yeah~ I'm sure you will be full of epic~

    yay! :D
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by dark_Raptor on Sat Apr 17 2010, 22:46

    Banouin wrote:
    dark_Raptor wrote:
    Banouin wrote:
    dark_Raptor wrote:SuperSpecialAwesome!

    Any word on when the next part to your story will be up Dr rap~?
    Hopefully--- in an hour and half or so.

    Dude! Yes! Jake
    Yeah! :D

    It's almost done! :D
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by quater on Sat Apr 17 2010, 23:12

    I read it and liked it. ^^
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sat Apr 17 2010, 23:14

    quater wrote:I read it and liked it. ^^

    I knew you would!
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Yoyo on Sun Apr 18 2010, 14:26

    dark_Raptor wrote:SuperSpecialAwesome!
    That pretty much says it all. :3
    Unless I'm going to quote myself from the other thread which went something like.....
    "GRAAAAAMMMMMAAAAARRRRRR!
    But cool."
    Or something. :3
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Mon Apr 19 2010, 19:20

    Yoyo wrote:
    dark_Raptor wrote:SuperSpecialAwesome!
    That pretty much says it all. :3
    Unless I'm going to quote myself from the other thread which went something like.....
    "GRAAAAAMMMMMAAAAARRRRRR!
    But cool."
    Or something. :3

    Then! You will edit the 3rd one~
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Mikel on Sun May 09 2010, 12:13

    XD AW so cute XD
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Banouin on Sun May 09 2010, 12:23

    Cute? D:
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by Mikel on Sun May 09 2010, 12:28

    yes, cute! XD
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    Re: Clan wars: Chapter two~

    Post by D-Dei on Tue May 11 2010, 22:16

    Ah, look. I see myself in this (:

    Oh, Yurii and her fetish of picking out Bano's typos :P

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