The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Banouin on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:36

    Did you make it? ^_^

    I came here thinking you had posted up chapter two. I was sad.
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:38

    Aw, sorry, I'm gonna post chapter 2 in a different topic. Still working on it,



    Notice like 2 new characters? :DD
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:40

    nice rap!
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:41

    I think I did best on Kenji, Roku, and the 2 girls.

    I screwed up on Kadami, and Tomi.
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:46

    how?
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:47

    Kadami looks too zoned out. And Tomi needs a better eye color.
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:49

    kadami has that "oooh really now? ." face XD
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:50

    XD
    Yeah, kind of... I also made one for a zombie, but it looks weird. D:
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:53

    put it up, and ALL zombies look weird :P
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:57

    Alright, give me a second.
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:57

    :D
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 21:59

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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:00

    best looking zombie i've seen
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:01

    Yeah it looks kind of weird, because he's not like, rabid.
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:01

    xD;; oh.
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:03

    Yamaka looks so innocent. :o
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:22

    mhm. that makes me wonder if she is ever gonna turn into a zombie...
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:32

    I don't know, but she just looks super innocent. : )
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:37

    yah :D
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:38

    Gonna go and write some more. ;)
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Toshii on Thu Apr 15 2010, 22:41

    yay :D
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Fri Apr 16 2010, 11:00

    VERY GOOD!!!
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Fri Apr 16 2010, 16:19

    Thanks Nina! : )
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Fri Apr 16 2010, 20:48

    :O Cool! D: THE ZOMBIE'S EYE!!! Dx...zombies are afraid of bagels, thats what my friend told me :D
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    Re: The Red Eclipse - Chapter 1

    Post by dark_Raptor on Fri Apr 16 2010, 20:49

    :D
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