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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:29

    thank you t-chan ^_^ so how do you think of Jz being the Naitokage hmm?
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    Post by Toshii on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:30

    a little unexpected~ :o
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:36

    well I just couldnt fine any other role that he would fit into you know?
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    Post by Toshii on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:37

    yeah~ (:

    pretty great so far~
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:41

    thank you T-chan. ^_^ so that does mean my writting is getting better. ^_^
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    Post by Toshii on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:42

    yesh! :3
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:44

    yayz! now I jus thave to figure ut how I want to write chapter 2..
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    Post by Toshii on Wed Mar 10 2010, 18:48

    yes. :o
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Thu Mar 11 2010, 00:31

    yep......
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    Post by Zergio on Thu Mar 11 2010, 10:38

    *Claps* Well done Nin! Its sounding good so far. just didn't expect you to put members in it! It adds on a interesting twist!
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    Post by mrssabakunogaara on Thu Mar 11 2010, 10:54

    Awesome! X3
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Thu Mar 11 2010, 17:19

    thank you both!!!! ^_^ you see I had this idea in my head about putting members in a story so I just went with it I'm actually taking reqest to be charaters in my story I'm only taking 5 requests to be in my story. so if either of you want just send me a PM with info on the OC charater.
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    Post by Toshii on Thu Mar 11 2010, 19:49

    :D nice nina~ (:
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    Post by jz-kun445 on Thu Mar 11 2010, 19:54

    YAY IM THE NAITOKAGE!! NIN, I ORDER YOU TO MAKE ANOTHER SWEET CHAPTER :33
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    Post by Toshii on Thu Mar 11 2010, 19:55

    xD haha
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Thu Mar 11 2010, 21:05

    Of course Naitokage-sama ^_^ as you wish.
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    Post by darkfallenangel on Sat Apr 03 2010, 11:26

    haha its very good ninjanii-chan!!!!!
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Sat Apr 03 2010, 14:31

    thank you Darknii-chan!!
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Fri Apr 16 2010, 11:23

    I tell you all now I will get to working on Chpt 2 either this weekend or next weekend
    ~thank you~
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Fri Apr 16 2010, 20:52

    chapter two!!

    Its has been two days since T-chan and me left the village there was only about two days journey from the meeting place where I would send toshii off with the Yamakagture ANBU that would be waiting there. " Hey Yami could we stop for a while? I'm getting tired and I'm hungry..." Toshii asked me out of breath. I stoped on a tree branch and jumped to the clearing below T-chan followed after. " Yeah lets I'm starting to feel those two nights with only 2 hours of sleep.." I replied as I collapsed down next to the tree and I brought out a couple packets of dried seeds and fruits." here you go T-chan." I said with a tiny smile. she nodded her thanks and began eating. I decided to rest my eyes for a moment hiding my chakra I let it snake its way through the trees to search for any danger. It seemed only moments later when I felt a powerful chakra heading towards the clearing I stood up and motioned for Toshii to hide in the trees I masked her presence using my own chakra. I stood there waiting tense as a lioness ready to pounce. The two of them entered the clearing both wearing black cloaks emblazened with crimson clouds. ~Akatsuki~ I thought to myself I knew I had to protect toshii at any cost form these two. " Hey danna,un you think shes the one gaurding that jinchuriki,yeah?" asked the taller of the two. the other one just looked at me for a moment. " Of course she is you moron, you take care of her while I look for the jinchuriki and make it quick Deidara you know I dont not like to be kept waiting or keep others waiting..." the shorter one replied grouchily. ~hmm Deidara missing nin of the stone village uses clay bombs a long range fighter S-ranked missing nin.. and if I'm correct Sasori of the red sands missing nin of the sand village uses human puppets and poison long to mid-range fighter best watch out for Sasori and his puppets but I shouldnt let my gaurd down with either of them~ I took a defencive stance. " If your looking for the jinchuriki your looking at the wrong person she is already half way to the mountain village." I said trying to make a fake out. " no she's not,un I can clearly sense her chakra in that tree behind you,yeah." the blonde one said smirking cruely. Out of nowhere I heard a rustling and a scream. ~TOSHII!!~ I saw her being drug out of the tree caught by the tail of hiruko(cant spell sorry T.T) ~damn it how could I let my gaurd down like that!~ " let her go.." I told them in a deadly calm. " let me think about that,hmm uh no,un." Deidara smirked. " but we will let her live if you come with us to the Akatsuki base it will make our mission so much easier." Sasori replied in his puppet emotionlessly..~damn it~ " No! I will never betray the night village!!" I shouted bravely. " fine then lets go Deidara our mission is complete.." Sasori ordered as he turned Toshii still in his grasp. " PLEASE YAMI HELP!!" Toshii screamed helplessly before deidara knocked her out. I stood there diliberating. " fine I'll go just dont hurt Toshii..." I told them defeated. Deidara walked over to me with a smirk on his face. " good choice,un" he said knocking me out as well. I dont know what happened after that but I knew I was on my way to becoming a Missing ninja and closer to the one thing that will sway my loyalty to my village. I just hope I will make it out before that happens.
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    Post by dark_Raptor on Fri Apr 16 2010, 21:06

    Yay! It's got good story, however, it's all clumped in a big paragraph. D:
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Fri Apr 16 2010, 21:09

    I know I cant write any other way my computer atumaticly puts it in one paragragh and I cant change it I've tried. so sorry about that....
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    Post by dark_Raptor on Fri Apr 16 2010, 21:10

    ninjakid23 wrote:I know I cant write any other way my computer atumaticly puts it in one paragragh and I cant change it I've tried. so sorry about that....

    What if I edited it? :D
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    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Fri Apr 16 2010, 21:12

    sure hey if you want you could be my beta of sorts for my story.
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    Post by dark_Raptor on Fri Apr 16 2010, 21:13

    I would do it, because I am a grammar nazi. : )

    But I would censor all the swearing, because I'm like that.

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