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    Dark Waters

    Post by YukiAkaneYaoi on Fri Feb 26 2010, 20:00

    yesh a new story!
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by mrssabakunogaara on Fri Feb 26 2010, 20:05

    alrighty,get to it young missy! Bwahaha
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by YukiAkaneYaoi on Wed Mar 03 2010, 12:48

    Dark Waters
    Chapter one

    Crying. That was what our favorite blue skined mist nin heard when walking home in the streets of Kirigakure. Curious, he looked for the source of the crying, only to find a little girl around the age of 4, crying behind a dumpster. He kneelt down beside her, and asked her why she was crying. The girl looked up, only to freeze in fright at the sight of the blue man. Imedietly when out of shock, she fell on her bum, and crawled away, only to have her back hit the nearby wall. Our blue friend got up, walked towards the little girl, kneelt down once more, and put his hand out to help her up, while saying, "Its ok, I'm a friend, I won't hurt you, by the way, my name is Kisame Hoshigaki." The girl was still frighted, but saw a little boy, around the age of eight, behind Kisame. The little boy said, "Don't worry, he won't hurt you, oh, and I'm Same." Same smiled, then disappered. The little girl also smiled, before accepting the helping hand. "My name is Meimu Kujo Kanashimi, its nice to meet you Kisa-san," Meimu said when she was on her feet. "Come on, Meimu, I'll take you to my house, and get you some food," Kisame said, walking out from behind the dumpster, fallowed by Meimu, and to said location. After a few minutes of walking, Meimu pulled on Kisame's shirt sleeve. Kisame looked down to find a very tired looking Meimu. He picked her up, and carried her the rest of the way back to his house.

    So how is it so far, I've typed more then I've written on paper, plus this is different, and better, then what I wrote, hehe, hope you liked.
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by arashi ryu on Wed Mar 03 2010, 13:03

    very good
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by YukiAkaneYaoi on Wed Mar 03 2010, 13:17

    arashi ryu wrote:very good

    Arigato, Sensei!
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by mrssabakunogaara on Wed Mar 03 2010, 13:51

    Tis pretty good so far! Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by YukiAkaneYaoi on Wed Mar 03 2010, 14:05

    mrssabakunogaara wrote:Tis pretty good so far! Oh Yeah!

    YAY!!
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by mrssabakunogaara on Wed Mar 03 2010, 14:07

    ^_^
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Wed Mar 03 2010, 16:23

    its very good yuki-san!!
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by YukiAkaneYaoi on Wed Mar 03 2010, 16:33

    ninjakid23 wrote:its very good yuki-san!!

    Thanks!
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Wed Mar 10 2010, 00:39

    your welcome.
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    Re: Dark Waters

    Post by Zergio on Thu Mar 11 2010, 10:49

    Interesting............

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