Burned Edges

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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    Burned Edges

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Feb 04 2010, 10:56

    There's no words to describe this love
    feelings juxtapose to my world above
    My wonderful yet confusing man
    I fumble with my words just please don't complain
    I turned bright pink with embarassment
    would I believe it was you and all your resemblance
    Words of care and emotion
    I believe my feelings are deep just as those ocean currents first commotion

    Losing words to tell how I feel
    seriously you know how to make your girl feel as nervous as a bee
    You accept me for all that I am
    You know how to take down a girl
    babe you know your my whole world

    Looking throught old wounds with brown eyes
    there's no shame in being a mess
    Your heart is so forgiving
    A life with you my love is worth living
    This relationship has rough burned edges
    but how I feel there is no breaking leverage

    Charred at the edges we are
    but you say we're nice
    See we're almost a year thats sweet in compare
    Protective in my dreams of no suffice

    I fall for the cheesy love stuff
    but most of all I've fallen for you even though we can be rough
    I believe with all I can that I love you
    the burned edges of this paper tell a story and I know we're not through
    What a beautiful mess we are
    but I said yes and our love is no compare
    The wait is so worth it I want you
    help me tear down my wall of security
    So I can connect to you with something new
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    Re: Burned Edges

    Post by judai12 on Thu Feb 04 2010, 17:16

    its really good
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    Re: Burned Edges

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Thu Feb 04 2010, 17:29

    very good.
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    Re: Burned Edges

    Post by Toshii on Thu Feb 04 2010, 18:09

    beautiful~
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    Re: Burned Edges

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Feb 06 2010, 02:33

    thank you
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    Re: Burned Edges

    Post by Toshii on Mon Feb 08 2010, 19:54

    no prob~
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    Re: Burned Edges

    Post by NightKitsuneQ on Mon Feb 08 2010, 21:53

    no problem.

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