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    Other Side of WOTNopolis Chapter 1

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Tue Dec 29 2009, 14:11

    Chapter 1






    A fine day in WOTNopolis. The sky was blue and the weather was grand.
    There was a peaceful aura that surrounded the area and all was
    quiet...a little...too quiet. In the middle of the quiet scene were
    two girls. One girl had short black hair and stared blankly at the
    frozen movements of the ducks that were in the middle of taking
    flight. The second girl had dark brown hair. They both stood dazed at
    what had just happened.
    "Everyone stopped," The girl with the black hair stated.
    The other girl's mouth gaped open. "W-what happened?"
    "Make it move again, Resh! Make everything move!" The black haired girl shouted.
    Resh was shocked. She had never heard her scream, not Rin, never. "I-I dont know how," Ureshii was close to tears.
    "I
    SAID MAKE IT MOVE!!!" Rin cried. Resh froze and tears started to pour
    out. Rin angrily grabbed her hand and shouted, "I SAID MOVE!"
    Then
    everything started moving again. Reshii's tears slowly stopped and Rin
    angrily stomped off. Fear had taken over Resh and she could not think
    straight. Now time moved again and she felt relieved but confused. She
    was confused about how Rin had made time move again.
    "Who are
    you?!" A man had blocked Rin's path. The man said nothing and looked at
    Resh. Unsurely, she walked over to Rin and held her hand in fear. The
    man motioned them to follow him. And so, in curiosity and fear, the two
    toddlers, no older than 7, had followed.
    Two years have passed and
    countless gangs filled WONTopolis. The two girls had lived in
    contentment and had mastered their special abilities. They lived in a
    little apartment on the third floor across a little bar. Rin and Resh
    would practice controlling their powers and fooled around with them.
    Time travel was a useful power Ureshii had. In the past two years, she
    had learned to focus her power in just a specific area and rewind what
    had been done, pause or fast forward.
    Rin, on the other had, did
    not have much of a power, at least it would not show. Rin could copy
    special abilities, usually just for a short period of time or however
    long she was in physical contact with the person. Unexpectedly, she had
    been able to duplicate and keep the power she copied. Resh knows of
    this but their sensei does not. However, he died a year ago when Resh
    had accidentally left him in the past. Luckily, no other gangs have
    discovered them yet. They have been taught to cover their power and
    their auras when needed.
    Loud noises came from the other side of the
    street. "Ugh, when will they ever be quiet?" Rin complained as Resh
    walked over to the window.
    "Hey, some tourists are here," Resh pointed.
    "Great," Rin sighed and played with her black hair that had grown over the years.
    Resh
    closed the blinds and sat back onto the couch when they suddenly heard
    flames cackle outside. They both ran to the windows and saw the bar
    across the street in flames. They called the fire department and waited
    for the flames to die down. When it did, the bar tender, Temari,
    clutched onto a piece of wood and cried silently. Resh and Rin would
    sometimes go down to the bar for a few drinks, soda, of course. The two
    planned to go down to what's left of the bar the next day and try to
    help her restore it.
    "Nooooooooooo!!!!" A boy suddenly shouted.
    The two girls looked out the window again and a brown haired boy
    clutched his chest, said a few words and curled up onto the ground in
    devestation.
    Resh and Rin stared at the group of people, presumably his friends or his aiding hands, stare at him inside the burnt bar.
    ~
    The next day, the two girls made their way down to their friend's
    broken bar. The entered through the doorway and found a brown haired
    guy looking for something on the ground.
    "Um...excuse me?" Rin asked then man.
    "Sorry, bar's closed!" He enthusiastically said and continued looking.
    "We were just wondering if we could help you..clean up and such," Rin said.
    "Sure!" The man hopped up onto his feet and smiled. It was the guy we saw last night.
    "What were you looking for?" Resh asked.
    "Cherry coke. But I guess t here isnt any," The man took one last look
    around and frowned, "Im Q, by the way." He took out a hand and we each
    shook it once.
    After short introductions, we started to clean the mess. Rin got hold of the broom while Resh was inspecting the fridge.
    "I cant believe the fridge got burned," Resh mumbled.
    "Where's Tem?" I asked after finally clearing the floor.
    "In the back," Q smiled. Rin and Resh presumed she was mourning over her bar in the back.
    When we had our breaks, Tem came out and drew an outline of an eagle on
    the wall of the bar. Q began to outline it until some men showed up.
    "You
    cant beat them all!" Rin held onto Q's arm. She stopped and stared at
    him. She felt his power of sound waves and Q looked at her oddly.
    "Dont worry," Q smiled ,"I've got it."
    Astonishingly,
    Rin and Resh did not think their newest friend with a chance of being
    mentally challenged, Q, could do it. But they saw it with their own
    two eyes. He was powerful and had wiped out the Rat Gang quickly.
    "There!" Q said proudly.
    "Wow!
    That was great!" Resh then noticed the time, "Oh, sorry, Q! We gotta go
    now! See ya later! We'll bring some cherry cokes next time!" She waved
    and carefully stepped over the bodies.
    Unexpectedly, Rin ran up to Q and hugged him. "Im so glad youre okay! I didnt think you could do it!"
    Q patted her head, "Have a little faith in me, rin!" He smiled and Rin let go.
    "Bye, Q!" She waved happily and Q waved back, not knowing she had secretly cloned Q's ability for herself.

    I do not own WOTNopolis :D (cuz Q and bano do :D) theres some parts where my story merges into the story :D I apologize if i do not get their personalities right Dx Do not get this mixed up with Reshii's fanfic D: cuz remeber, her's is in a different dimension of WOTNopolis! :O Thats why Q is mayor and bano is a girl :D and theyre shot chapters :D not as long as WOTNopolis ones :D or even as long as reshii's >.>;; and why is it on the side?! Dx Ill fix it when i can...when i know how too...when im not lazy :D
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    Re: Other Side of WOTNopolis Chapter 1

    Post by quater on Tue Dec 29 2009, 17:33

    No one's replied to this yet. Not sure why. I thought it was cool.
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Tue Dec 29 2009, 17:43

    cuz no one likes me!!
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    Post by quater on Tue Dec 29 2009, 18:10

    I doubt that.
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    Post by Toshii on Tue Dec 29 2009, 18:58

    awesome rin!
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    Post by Ikazu Raiken on Tue Dec 29 2009, 19:39

    Nice. o.ob
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Tue Dec 29 2009, 19:41

    yes! >:D more people read it! X3 and thank you, you three! ^o^/
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    Post by Toshii on Tue Dec 29 2009, 19:59

    no prob! ^_^
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    Re: Other Side of WOTNopolis Chapter 1

    Post by UreshiiQ on Tue Dec 29 2009, 21:46

    quater wrote:No one's replied to this yet. Not sure why. I thought it was cool.

    And she did it all by herself :D
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Tue Dec 29 2009, 21:47

    Azarni_Rin wrote:cuz no one likes me!!

    Are you kidding? Everybody loves you Riz-niz *glomps you*
    I just found this story right now, btw. Oh Yeah! It's really good Puppy Dog Eyes
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Tue Dec 29 2009, 22:16

    yay! X3 thank you!
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Tue Dec 29 2009, 22:57

    You're welcome Puppy Dog Eyes
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    Post by Toshii on Tue Dec 29 2009, 22:58

    ^_^
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Wed Dec 30 2009, 09:17

    Upadate~
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Wed Dec 30 2009, 13:37

    publishing chp 2 now :D
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Wed Dec 30 2009, 13:38

    how do we do that link thingy so i cant put the link of this on there?! Dx
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Wed Dec 30 2009, 14:02

    Hurry up and publish, you can edit the link in later.
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Wed Dec 30 2009, 14:29

    i did publish it Airhead
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Wed Dec 30 2009, 21:10

    Yay~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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    Post by ThiCup on Wed Dec 30 2009, 22:00

    when do i come in?
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Wed Dec 30 2009, 22:25

    You lready did...check the next chappie~
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    Post by ThiCup on Wed Dec 30 2009, 22:36

    i did. Happy
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Wed Dec 30 2009, 23:51

    Hey Thi~ You're cooler in our story >:D
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Thu Dec 31 2009, 13:42

    nuh uh~ your immortal (practically) in my fanfic! >:D
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    Post by UreshiiQ on Thu Dec 31 2009, 16:45

    XD

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