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    Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Mon Nov 30 2009, 14:58

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    -note: this takes place in a different time-

    Okay, I was thinking about an idea for a story, were the main charicter, and somethers, find there add-on chips. when they add them to there phones, and go onto the new feature, there taken to a new world, and in this world they have to fight there way through monsters.

    While there on this plant, there phones, don't work, put they get a bit of a different use to them.

    Thats the basics of my idea. if I get enough feedback, I may make the first chapter.

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    -Charicter names (for 2 guys and 1 girl (I already have 1 name thaught of)
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Mon Nov 30 2009, 17:58

    maybe you can call the girl Rina =)
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Mon Nov 30 2009, 18:58

    Seth? :D Thats my favorite guy name :D
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Tue Dec 01 2009, 18:55

    okay, but how is the story idea?
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Tue Dec 01 2009, 19:00

    :D it reminds me of digimon? :D cept the cell idea. they had watches...i think? :D
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Tue Dec 01 2009, 19:02

    cool. it sounds like a mix of digimon and pokemon and yu-gi-oh.
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Tue Dec 01 2009, 19:02

    well its not gona be like digimon, i'm gona have them kill the monsters, not work with them
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Tue Dec 01 2009, 19:03

    oh...
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Tue Dec 01 2009, 19:06

    I got the idea of this from a game i'm playing
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    Post by Azarni_Rin on Tue Dec 01 2009, 20:08

    ooooh! Kill mosters! :D definetly not like digimon OR pokemon. those things are so friendly....
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Thu Dec 03 2009, 17:24

    lol, the story plot is going to be something like this:

    (male name) works for a galatic federation, were his father is an admirl. The story starts as (enter male name) and his father; (enter his father name), are searching some ruins when suddenly, (enter male name) is swallowed by a strange light.

    When (enter male name) awakens, he is in a forest and not in the ruins. After checking his communicator, and not getting a signal. He sees a girl being chased by a strange monster. Atfter saving her, and going doing something in (enter city name here), and find out that he is a scared hero who is said in legend to save the world.


    How dose that sound?
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Thu Dec 03 2009, 17:26

    awesome! ^_^
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Little_Shiro on Thu Dec 03 2009, 17:27

    good but really need names for them
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    Post by Toshii on Thu Dec 03 2009, 17:37

    i want the girl's name to be Rina! D:
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Thu Dec 03 2009, 19:22

    XD scared hero...nice typo XD unless that is supposed to be scared...
    Rina's a great name! :D And seth! :D Cant go wrong with the name seth! :D
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Thu Dec 03 2009, 19:23

    thanks rin!
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Sun Dec 06 2009, 08:11

    why do you like the name rina so much?
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Sun Dec 06 2009, 09:10

    um...i'm not sure.

    it's not a matter of liking but it's the only suggestion i got....

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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Sun Dec 06 2009, 12:22

    XD
    cause its rin with an a! :D
    you could also use circe! but thats more on the evil side kinda name....i like that name....=.=
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by JJDOMER45 on Thu Dec 10 2009, 15:01

    That is a cool story. I would read it, but SACRED not SCARED. HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!
    That was very funny, I gotta admit.
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Darkflame on Thu Dec 10 2009, 17:02

    well i was rushing, and i didn't use a spell check
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Little_Shiro on Thu Dec 10 2009, 18:17

    I liked it ^_^
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Sat Dec 12 2009, 09:42

    where's it at??
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Dec 12 2009, 11:39

    what name did you think of DF?
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    Re: Story Idea

    Post by Toshii on Sun Dec 13 2009, 12:31

    >.< *in head* rina, rina, rina, rina, rina, rina...

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