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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    Failure

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Nov 12 2009, 20:58

    I feel as though I'm trapped within this pit of mine
    Slowly deceasing for til the end of time
    Tick Tock! Tick Tock! As my days go by...
    the biggest suffering is of my demise
    Ripping and biting at my emotions
    is it "Failures" austere of no lawed corrosions
    As it breaks down every bit of hope I once known

    As the days and weeks go by I'm wondering why
    I've failed and fallen into a deep cavernless pit
    Seeking help from the one I love...
    as he calls my name from up above
    "I feel like whats the point of moving on...
    just let me sit her and watch you move along"
    Darkness envelopes me replacing that joy I once had
    Slapped in the face is the only thing I've come to find
    I sit in this dark hole crying because of my "failures"

    My time is running out and so is my will
    piled upon the work has left nothing still
    But I have you here and maybe that'll help
    I'm stuck within this state of mind
    You tell me I'm not a "failure" but can I truly believe
    Have I truly "failed" that is the question that lure in my mind
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    Re: Failure

    Post by Toshii on Thu Nov 12 2009, 21:43

    nice... :D

    it sure sends a feeling that faliure is something that's replacing all emotions and thoughts.
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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    Re: Failure

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Nov 12 2009, 23:25

    thanks
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    Re: Failure

    Post by Toshii on Fri Nov 13 2009, 18:47

    you're welcome! ^.^ you're a great poet!

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