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    Exile

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Nov 08 2009, 18:40

    Destiny pulls its awful wrenching weight across my mind
    Pulling and dragging me into darkness where no man wants to be left behind...
    I walk this land in wonder for I can never slumber...
    thinking of home and all I remember, heartfelt memories of last December

    Pushed and cast away fighting against this deathly wind
    my face scorn with the tattered hatred of the world
    Never more to be returned I feel my heart drop...
    Drop down into the depths of this wasteland of exile
    Striving forward with nothing, but my spirit...
    Carrying the despair, loneliness and cautiously not fearing it

    The wrath of exile its trying to tear me apart
    Ripped and shattered you can't tear at my heart
    Sinking it claws in the depths in my mind
    intertwining its ghastly hate in lost divinde
    Try as you must "exile" you can't bring me down
    I'll shine through your evil deeds until the end of time
    Living for myself I'll rise from your lurking shadows
    Forever free but always thinking of where I came from
    "Exile" you can't touch the strength I carry with all that your made of
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    Re: Exile

    Post by quater on Sun Nov 08 2009, 18:55

    You haven't done a poem in a while!
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    Re: Exile

    Post by Toshii on Sun Nov 08 2009, 20:35

    that was beautiful crissy-chan! this is the first time i've seen one of your poems!
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    Re: Exile

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Nov 08 2009, 20:39

    thanks toshii^^
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    Re: Exile

    Post by Toshii on Tue Nov 17 2009, 20:40

    CrispinFreemanWatcher16 wrote:thanks toshii^^

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    Re: Exile

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Thu Nov 19 2009, 22:04

    You don't think this one is good?

    I think it's one of your better ones. Nice imagery!
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    Re: Exile

    Post by Azarni_Rin on Fri Nov 20 2009, 19:06

    love it ^.^ its so wonderful ^.^
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    Re: Exile

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Nov 28 2009, 04:00

    great word choice Cris!
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    Re: Exile

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Nov 28 2009, 04:02

    thanks shiro, saba & rin
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    Re: Exile

    Post by Toshii on Sun Nov 29 2009, 18:07

    are you going to make another?
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    Re: Exile

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Dec 06 2009, 13:17

    yeah i'm going to make more

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