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    Post by superchief2010 on Wed Oct 07 2009, 00:14

    Contray to popular belief, people tend to manufacture the notion that life in general is irrelavent.Only those who have tasted the dark despair of death and those that have rung his door bell can deeply understand it's significance.



    Cliche'
    I was in the shadow or torment,
    I've tasted the cruelty it has to offer,
    the afterlife is a cold place,
    where nothingness runs amuck,
    It offers no, joy, no love , no light,
    just a dark wasteland of sorrow and despair,
    A place from which the jaws of life sparred my young soul,
    Though battered and bruised, I rose fro the dead,
    aand stood amongst the living.
    The light blinded my eyes, the love smothered me, the joy of being alive was the best feeling in the world.
    Once I was a gloomy and laid back individual,
    but a cliche' changed my perspective on life.
    A life is not irrelavent,and i took a near death experience to make me understand.

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    Post by neon kun on Sun Dec 27 2009, 03:27

    that's nice. based on experience?

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    Post by superchief2010 on Sun Dec 27 2009, 15:49

    naw it was just a freewrite
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    Post by neon kun on Tue Dec 29 2009, 15:07

    XD oh, that was mikel. not me.

    XD i like it! it had the heavy meaning that just makes one wonder what made you write something like that. XD

    it's really nice XD and it's just freewrite!

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