WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Choushi on Mon Dec 10 2007, 10:44

    lol...sorry dude...but ur the best fit to tell her....but nobody else....i think i could get a suprize with the identity of oni.....
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by yondaime2 on Mon Dec 10 2007, 12:00

    is there gonna be a new chapter
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Choushi on Wed Dec 12 2007, 01:04

    i juss posted it on the last page....as i get more time on my comp Damn Technology! i'll start writing again
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Dec 12 2007, 01:47

    having cp troubles...
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Choushi on Thu Dec 13 2007, 01:55

    yea a little......

    NEW CHAPTER IS ON PAGE 7 EVERYBODY!!!!
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Choushi on Fri Dec 14 2007, 02:05

    Choushi wrote:
    NEW CHAPTER....


    chapter 6:revenge
    Q:
    *at the verge of tears* they....they were only genin...

    Oni & Choushi:
    THE GENIN!?!?!?!?

    oni:
    that monster..killing young genin like that....

    Choushi:
    lets get him..oni

    oni:
    WHAT?! we cant fight a shinobi like that

    Choushi:
    i
    know he's powerful...but we gotta try *tearing up* u dont remember
    oni??? they were kids...kids with dreams...kids that wanted to help
    their country

    Oni:
    i know...i know

    *flash back*

    genin 1:
    ONI SAMA...I'm tired

    oni:
    *looks back at the struggling genin...he is carrying loads of Equipment on his back.* hold up everybody...

    choushi:
    *stops* whats up oni..

    oni:
    dont
    you realize...these genin arent normal genin...you see we were taught
    to be balenced...to know taijutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutusu...these
    genin here...are all specialized in one area.

    Choushi:
    *looks at the bunch* oh i see what you mean....*points at genin with a great physique* so he...is a main taijutsu user....

    genin 2:
    Hai

    oni:
    *points at another genin* her...shes a medical nin...

    Genin 3:
    hai

    choushi:
    that last kid...in the back...why does he carry everybody elses bags??

    Genin 1:
    Choushi-sama *attempts to bow but almost falls he is so tired* i am the weapons specialist......

    oni:
    so all those bags...they're yours?? WTF?!?!

    Genin 1 :
    yes sir...

    choushi:
    so they were taught just in one area....because if they were taught our way...it would take too long....

    oni:

    so u guys are ready to fight

    all genin:
    hai oni sama...

    oni:
    but dont you have families?? dont you have something to live for??

    Genin 3:
    well
    oni sama....we want to have experience in the battlefield so that some
    day we can be like you.....an anbu...we all want to become the national
    protectors of the sand....

    *flashback ends*

    oni:
    lets go

    choushi:
    are you ready

    oni:
    they
    wanted to be like us choushi...they wanted to share their dreams with
    us...we cannot let their memory be defiled by our cowardice...we have
    to get revenge

    *fades out to the distance where titan is*

    Titan:
    *looks at the bodies* hmph...pitiful....what does the sand take me for..a fool??? time to finish this....Shadow manipulation!!!
    *from the darkness two arms made of shadows appear*
    GO!!!
    *thrusts his arms and the shadow arms do the same...*

    *goes back to the sands army*

    Q:
    MEN THE TIME IS NOW.....CHARGE!!!!!

    army:
    *loud screams of anger* A:LFGKJOPEIWJKGJNLSKJWEROPIJSRRRRGGGHA
    *runs twoard titan*

    Q:
    oni, choushi...

    *both appear*

    Choushi & oni:
    yes, Q sama??

    Q:
    im so sorry....the genin didnt stand a chance...but maybe our numbers will give us the advantage *looks out to the battlefield.*

    *on the battle field the two shadow arms are cutting, slashing and tearing apart the army*

    Q:
    RETREAT?!?!!?!!?!?

    *the
    army is now down to a small number...the small number are all injured
    and start racing back....the shadow arms pick up two more and bury them
    in the clouds up above*

    *after the shadow arms come for Q.*

    Q:
    SAND WALL!! *a sand wall comes up from the ground behind the small army to protect them...the shadow arms still come for Q...

    oni:
    *takes
    out sword* time for our revenge*takes out sword*lets go choushi *flash
    steps on the ledge as Q has the sand follow oni as he flash steps so he
    can stay airborne*

    choushi:
    ok oni...
    HOUSEI!!!
    *the two titanium pipes are released and increse in size as choushi grabs them*

    jin:
    choushi...go...i'll watch Q-sama

    Choushi:
    *bows* hai jin-sama *jumps off ledge onto the sand wall

    oni:
    *close to the shadow arm*
    GRRAAAGHAAA *slashes the shadow arm..it falls down limp*

    choushi:
    SONIC BOOM!!!
    *a wave of sound sclices the other shadow arm it too falls limp*

    oni:
    that was too easy....*looks out to the distance at titan* WTF?!?! hes not going for the army anymore?!? he's going for.....Q SAMA!!!

    *the pieces of the shadow arms connect together and shoot straight for the kazekage...and both hit him with clinched fists*

    oni, choushi and jin:
    KAZEKAGE-SAMA

    *oni
    jumps from the sand tower onto the sand wall pulling out both
    swords...and sending wind bursts at both arms...cutting them in half
    again.*
    jin:
    you will not harm the kazekage

    *Q is in the sand tower knocked out cold*

    choushi:
    oni...get over here

    oni:
    *flash steps to choushi* yea???..

    choushi:
    we cant beat those shadow....things by just hitting them...we have to go to the source...

    oni:
    but the kazekage will be dead by the time we get there....he's like four miles away

    choushi:
    dont worry...i made a new jutsu just for an occasion like this...
    SOUND TELEPORTATION!!!
    hang on oni
    *both their bodies dissolve*

    *FADES OUT*

    jose:
    OH SO YOU THOUGHT YOU WERE GOOD?? well ur good for genin...but for the job i need you for...not even close

    spyke:
    wh...what are these

    jose:
    you are in my ice tombs...this is jagon...and this is my other jutsu..
    RAINING ICE SHARDS!!!
    *ice shards appear and shoot into the ice tombs*

    kisame:
    haha ur jutsu doesnt do anything...XD

    jose:
    it doesnt work?? or does it
    *as the shards melt the water turns into purple liquid spewing into the ice tomb*

    spyke:
    thats....POISON!?!!?!?!?!

    jose:
    ur so smart spyke...haha..hahaha..lol..buwahhahahaha

    ALL GENIN:
    *screams of terror*
    aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhggggggggghhhhhaaa

    *fades out*

    *oni and choushi both appear in front of titan*

    titan:
    ooh a challenge...finally

    choushi:
    STFU! alright? you say nothing....*swings aori kane* SOUND MANIPULATION: FISTS OF FURY!!!
    *transparent fists are made and thrusted foward at titan*

    titan:
    lol...*bring
    arms up and simultaniously bringing up shadows engulfing the fist in
    darkness* here...some of your own medicine..*blasts the darkness at
    choushi...hitting him square in the eyes*

    choushi:
    AAAGGRRGARAFGRGAGARGRGRGARG *flys back covering eyes..hitting the ground*

    oni:
    CHOUSHI???
    *looks at his fallen comrade..then back at titan* thats it *brings out
    sword....pointing it at the sky the faint aura of a pheonix appears
    over oni...oni's eyes glow a bluish red and his sword is covered in
    flames also...* you ....you cannot kill many of my comrades and attempt
    to assassinate the kazekage without unleashing the fury of the red
    pheonix of the sand.....Oni...me...

    titan:
    ur full of bull...ur village is a bunch of *stabbed* uugh.....*falls onto his knees*

    oni:
    i will uphold my way of the ninja.

    THIS IS THE NEWEST CHAPTER!!!!!!
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by quater on Fri Dec 14 2007, 18:37

    Giz I feel so weakly portrayed ^_^

    JK.

    Hey Choushi I would love to help with the next Chapter if you need any.
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    Post by Renden2005 on Fri Dec 14 2007, 20:44

    i thought so too...i'll help give you some more credit too Q-sama...
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Dec 15 2007, 03:45

    c'mon Q......i did that purposely......dont worry everyone gets their battles.....just relax.....
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    Post by Titaniumxvx on Sat Dec 15 2007, 12:12

    Aw, wow! No, really, I am kickas.

    But who was the oni fool who stabbed me? I didn't get that....meh
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    Post by quater on Sat Dec 15 2007, 13:49

    Choushi wrote:c'mon Q......i did that purposely......dont worry everyone gets their battles.....just relax.....

    I said JK....I was more curious about my name still being in the title.
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    Post by Choushi on Sun Dec 16 2007, 00:47

    oh
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    Post by spyke543 on Thu Dec 27 2007, 01:42

    Choushi wrote:jose:
    it doesnt work?? or does it
    *as the shards melt the water turns into purple liquid spewing into the ice tomb*

    spyke:
    thats....POISON!?!!?!?!?!

    jose:
    ur so smart spyke...haha..hahaha..lol..buwahhahahaha

    Lol. It's good Choushi. Keep it rolling.
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    Post by Choushi on Thu Dec 27 2007, 02:21

    thanx mayn.......
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    Post by Endless Nothing on Thu Dec 27 2007, 18:33

    This is quite the comical Fanfic Choushi, i've been enjoying it thus far and can not wait for the next chapter.
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Dec 29 2007, 19:32

    thanx endless....but for now...im gonna put this on a break for i am releasing another series..with renden....but i promise all my faithfull users.....there will b more chapters....pinky swear...lol
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 29 2007, 19:35

    Damn...I wanted more soon!!!
    Wahh

    You better stick to the promise!!!
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    Post by jake989 on Sat Dec 29 2007, 19:51

    YAY PROMISE!!
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Dec 29 2007, 20:35

    Angelic Harmony wrote:Damn...I wanted more soon!!!
    Wahh

    You better stick to the promise!!!


    well u have WAY better ff buddy....and dont worry when the WOTN FF comes back it'll be bigger badder and better than ever.....thats another promise......

    oh and jake.......promises are always fun to make bcuz it gives me something to work hard for to keep it.......
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 29 2007, 20:41

    Okay Choushi-kun!!!
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Dec 29 2007, 20:51

    hey i have an idea....next chapter i write......i'll PM it to u...and you can revise it....hmmm???? but im not gonna give u the whole chapter.....that would ruin the suprises i have in store....
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 29 2007, 20:57

    Puppy Dog Eyes

    Surprise...Nya, sounds so awsome!
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Dec 29 2007, 21:01

    yup.....and if i have enough time...and u 2.....we could write 1........i love writing....so if u have an idea anytime....i'll write or do whatever i can to help
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    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 29 2007, 21:04

    Nya, writing is my life ^___^ That seems like a cool idea! You are an awsome write Choushi-kun! Charm is a fan of the writing!
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Dec 29 2007, 21:14

    and im a fan of yours.....you have a captivating way of writing......

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