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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:24

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    *an old scroll opens and the five great shinobi nations are glowing*
    "Ahh...i've found it..the map..the old five great shinobi nations. mighty and true..."
    *the
    scroll fades from view as another, more recent scroll opens showing the
    leaf, cloud, and stone fade and three new nations brighten up in their
    place*
    "yet
    the mighty five were cut down to two. thunder, lightning, rain, hail come
    shinobi of the storm village. over the cloud nin in a mere
    month did they prevail...snow, icicles, white and blue, stone nin decimated in a month
    too...yet the leaf who were the strongest of all...surrendered to the
    shadows they did easily fall...many were killed that day but lucky ones
    fled...but the story of the naruto you once knew is...DEAD"

    *the
    scroll closes into a black background while the new symbols of the new
    5 great shinobi villages are etched into the background*

    chapter 1: the invading nations


    *two fists hit the table with A mighty bang*
    DAMN!!!!
    *the mans face is revealed to look a little like the pirate of legend, monkey d. luffy*
    the village of shadows...why are their shinobi so hard to hit???
    *another man wearing an ANBU mask enters*
    kazekage-sama...calm
    down..my men have it under controll..our village is growing at a steady
    rate and our chuunin are ready whenever you need them.
    *kazekage*
    CHUUNIN??? what happened to all of our jounin???
    *Anbu*
    ALL of our jounin were eliminated in the fourth great shinobi war...don't you remember kazekage Quarter???
    *Q*
    *looks
    down* yes...jin. i remember *a quick flashback of a thousands of dead bodies
    with sand forehead protectors lying on the ground...no blood...just
    deep bruises...brought back from flashback* many great shinobi died
    that day.
    *Jin*
    may i suggest an alliance witn tne mist???
    *Q*
    NO!!! I WILL NOT WORK WITH A MAN THAT HAS WATER CONSTANTLY ON THE BRAIN!!!
    *Jin*
    my appologies Kazekage-sama*fades out*

    *a thundorous roar of frustration echoes from an underwater base*
    BOTH OF THEM!!!! :x
    *a chuunin bows respectfully*
    yes mizukage-sama..both the storm and glacier village are coming this way.
    *mizukage*
    well then amateratsu...call in the reinforcements.
    *amsteratsu*
    ummmmm...jose-sama???
    all our trained shinobi are already out to meet the enemy halfway...and
    by the transmissions i'm getting.. there shinobi are neumorous.
    *jose*
    WELL TRAIN SOME MORE MEN TO REINFORCE THEM!!!
    *amaterasu*
    but sir...we're down to our last 50 nins...
    *jose*
    then call upon the other villages.
    *amaterasu*
    the last one save for us is sand.
    *jose*
    DAMN...i hate the sand...nevermind that then.
    *fades into darkness*

    *a scroll rolls across the frame with a picture of jose and Q.*
    these
    mens destinies are intertwined...to survive this new change and not
    give in to the new villages these two leaders must ally with each other
    or their villages will meet the same doom as the leaf,cloud and
    stone...*scroll closes and the mist and sand symbols glow brightly in
    the black background and slowly start to fade*

    Chapter 2: the two surviving nations

    *a kunai flies across the panel...its destination...Kazekage Q*
    *the kunaireaches its destination...Q's forehead, but Q starts turning to a brownish color
    and a grainy texture*
    *Q's attacker*
    "Damn it a sand clone"*does hand seals*
    *the real Q comes up from the
    sand and shoots his sand arrow at the myterious attacker...the attacker
    is shown to be a....SAND ANBU?!?!?!?...the anbu dodges the arrow with
    blinding speed and somehow appears behind an unsuspecting Q*
    "SHELL BULLET OF POW.....uuuugh(moan of immense pain)
    *anbu falls to the ground covering his privates in silent agony*
    Q:"nice
    try oni...but you really shouldnt say your next jutsu out loud like
    that...i could hear it from a mile away...thats why i had to kick you
    in the nads...lol
    *helps the pain ridden anbu up to his feet*
    Oni:Thank you for the training (moan of pain) kazekage-sama
    Q:
    no prob mate...we need to get better for the invasion of our
    village...and it WILL happen soon...i can feel it in my bones.*fades out to black*
    *the
    black on the panel suddenly gets disturbed and turns into a shadowy silloete of a
    man...the panel zooms out to show a man standing between two trees, his
    shadow stretching too the bottom of the panel...the next panel zooms in
    to show the face of this mysterious figure, but his face is covered
    with shadows, a sinister white smile runs across his face while a leaf
    falls slowly in front of him..the leaf is engulfed in the shadows
    quickly and to not be seen.*
    Shadow guy: heh, sand village???? you
    will fall just like you're weak allies.you will be enguled in my shadow yet. (evil laugh) *many other
    shadows appear on the spot and start to laugh in an evil manner also*
    *fade out*

    *a man looks down from above to see little teenagers
    doing very intense training...he is the mizukage...the leader of the
    mist..*
    Jose: these kids are very talented...but they're too
    young..all our veteran shinobi are gone and most of these kids are
    lucky to say they have been able to do a C rank mission *hangs head in
    depression* my legendary swordsmen...4 are dead (FOUR!!?! yes four,)
    two had left the village a long time ago...one left...AMATERATSU!!!!
    *amateratsu enters and bows*
    amateratsu: Ohayo mizukage-sama why do you call?
    Jose:
    i need you to gather the best nin of that group of kids...i need...six
    o them...and get them some well made swords*smirks*(whats this???? six kids..why does he need six...find out the
    reason in the next chapter of WOTN..THE SERIES)

    Chapter 3: the start of the war...
    *five
    newly ranked chuunin sit in the training area exhausted from a hard
    days training. airelement, Lajin Lee, Spyke,Yukimura, Kisame (named
    after her father, kisame).*
    amateratsu: YOU...(counts in head) FIVE!!!!!? Mizukage-sama needs you in his office ....NOW!!!
    *all five of them jump in suprise as they stand up and form into a line and slowly walk into the mizukages office*
    Spyke:Hopefully we're not in trouble...
    *they walk in sluggishly into the the office which is filled with a light mist*
    Jose: do u kno why i brought the five of you here????
    Lajin: TO MAKE US JOUNIN!!!!!!?
    Jose: uhhhhh....no
    Spyke:to tell us we have been doing a GREAT job as chuunin?????
    Jose: wrong again *starts playing paddleball*
    Yukimura:to tell us were gonna be MODERATORS???(little joke)
    Jose:wrongo....
    Kisame:w....
    Jose:*cuts
    in* NO!!!! scince you guys obviously dont know why i brought you here...
    its becaue...you five...are the WORST CHUUNIN WE HAVE!!!!! *starts pacing*
    and as you know we have most of our shinobi out to meet the storm AND
    the glacier villages who are trying to decimate us!!!! we
    cannot have weakness....so i have decided to train ALL five of you....*stops pacing*
    *THE MIST GETS THICKER* starting *JOSE DISSAPEARS INTO THE MIST* now...
    *the five chuunin looking confused search through the room as the mist thickens until the panel fades out*

    *a peaceful scene of the shore is suddenly disrupted by the storm clouds and ice that is coming to the shore*
    mist Jounin #1: HERE THEY COME....TAKE YOUR PLACES MEN...INITIATE MIST CLOAK!!!! * all mist shinobi make the dragon sign*
    *a heavy blanket of mist covers the shore*
    mist
    jounin #1: archer nin...ready *a single archer nin makes hundreds of
    water clones... archer nins now take bows and kunais and fuse the kunai
    with water and pull back* AIM... *they point their arrows into the sky*
    FIRE!!!!! * hundreds of flying water kunai fly up into the air as the
    frame goes black*

    *Q and Jin talk to their men (and women)*
    Q: MEN!!!!! we need you to fight with strength, pride, and with THE WILL TO DEFEAT THE SHADOW..
    EVERYBODY: YES KAZEKAGE Q-SAMA!!!!!!
    Q: ONI!!!!!!
    *oni-anbu appears from the sand*
    Oni: yes kazekage Q-Sama?
    Q: I want you to take half of these *points at genin* uuuummm....men...to battle..
    Oni: *hesitantly* y-y-y-yes SIR!!
    Q: CHOUSHI!!!!?!
    *a
    man who has been standing on a building in the background suddenly
    dissapears and appears in front of Q..he has two, big titanium Pipe
    like instruments in which the diameter is about half a meter, strapped
    onto his back...his nose and mouth are covered by his bandages...his
    straps have his forehead protector on them...he is a chuunin with great
    power..the power to manipulate sound*
    Choushi: *bows* how may i serve you kazekage-sama?!?
    Q:CHOUSHI!!!! dude u always scare me like that...anyway back to the point... i need you to take the other half of our genin...
    Choushi: *also hesitant* ummmm...y-yes sir!!!
    Q: Jin, you take the chuunin while i take the other anbu in a smaller, more convinient team...ok
    Jin: YES Q-Sama!!!
    *Q
    makes a very tall sand tower while choushi makes the words of the
    kazekage louder by manipulating the soundwaves he emitts from his mouth*
    Q:
    SUNA!!!!! WE MUST FIGHT!!!! AS WE SPEAK THE SHADOW VILLAGE MOVES
    THROUGH THE LAND OF FIRE INTO OUR TERRITORY!!!! WE MUST FIGHT FOR
    POWER, STRENGTH, LOVE FOR SUNA AND ALL HER GLORY, AND MOST IMPORTANTLY
    FIGHT FOR OUR WAY OF THE NINJA!!!!!!
    Crowd: SUNA!!!SUNA!!!!SUNA!!!!!
    *Q
    disperses his sand tower and heads out with his anbu...dissapearing
    into the sand...Jin and his neumorous group all follow in the same
    fashion leaving choushi and Oni with the genin....Scince the genin dont
    know the sand teleportation jutsu yet...they must run.*

    *meanwhile the Q's group and Jin's group make it to the battle field*
    SAND WALL JUTSU!!!!!
    *all
    shinobi reach down to the ground and the sand stretches up from the
    ground making a HUUGE wall...They jump onto the other side of the wall*
    Q:
    *thinking*
    wait????? wheres oni and choushi with the genin...damn that oni with
    his ideas...one of these days he will be the death of me...they might
    not know it but those genin are key to this battle...*fades out*

    *the dark figure returns with another figure*
    Figure #1: they dont seem that strong...this'll be easier than the leaf.
    Figure#2: NOBODY CAN DEFEAT THE SHADOWS WHO ARE LED BY......


    chapter 4: I AM THE MAIN CHARACTER!!!!!
    announcer guy:a long time ago...when the old shinobi villages were intact and in peace they sent all their convicts to the same place......deep into the south of the continent.....the place called the village......of.....HELL....the 5 shinobi nations would have their convicted felons stay in that village....the only way to get out is to die......the spot of the village was picked by every current kage...they all picked the same exact spot......rain never got there because there were enormus monoliths and mountains....and some days they diddnt even get sun.....they were condemned to live in the shadows and whenever there was sun...it was hated because the land was so dry it caught wildfires.....they hated it there so they eventually adapted...like all humans do......they formed jutsu based off the shadows and became bigger and stronger.....they became a strong village the most feared village of alll...the village hidden in the shadows....
    the government was an anarchy...but a civillized one at that......there was a man and his wife the poorest in the village....they had nothing except their son...who was the first child born in the village.....he was the youngest in the village...there fore he got all the knowlege of the older men and was brought up to be a tyrrant.....a titan to be exact....he was named titan.....because he was being brought up to be even stronget than the gods......his natural talent was put into effect when he had a run in with a middle aged man with a shiruken......the man came to stab him but with one glance at titans eyes he died.....titans eyes were that of a new bloodline...his eyes were so red that if you were to look into them you could see how you die...usually the shock alone can kill a man but titan wanted more.....he wanted controll...he wanted power...he actually wanted to be a TITAN....so he spent years alone training himself killing many other people in the village.......after the training he was not only show you how you die, but with eye contact can make you go through it using genjutsu, but the deadliest part was when he mixed it with his shadow jutsu he could ACTUALLY kill you the way you saw it......he killed so many they changed the village into a monarchy....a man named punk filter being king......pF wanted to kill all who live under the sun and engulf the world into shadows, but titan didnt want that he wanted to get used to the sun and live normally.....as the leaf village was taken over titan was contemplating on how he would take the village out of the shadows........


    Chapter 5: the war really begins
    *titan stands in the back of an army*
    this has no use why are we attacking the strongest village. especially when all these guys are totally over their forties and suna has a community of young chuunin and they are the strongest in the world now....
    *PF*
    TITAN!!!!!!!!
    *titan*
    damn it... i gotta walk all the way over there
    *PF*
    HURRY UP!
    *titan*
    ok *makes hand sign and combines with his own shadow and moves through the rest of the army..when he reaches PF he goes back up to normal size* yes kurokage sama?
    *PF*
    i want you to go and destroy the sand villages defenses......BY YOURSELF!!
    *titan*
    WHAT?! WTF?!?! i cant kill all those men!!!!
    *PF*
    you can and you will

    *fades out*

    *oni and choushi finally make it to the battlefield*
    ONI: Q!!!!

    *Q turns around*
    ok now they're here we can fight now...COME HERE AND LETS FIGHT!!!!!
    *Q turns back around to see the sky turning black and getting dark*
    there here.
    *jin*
    no Q sama.......he is here
    *fades out*

    *jose*
    hahahah you guys cant see me? find me? where can i possibly.*gets cut* uuuuuugh......
    spyke
    sorry mizukage i am an excellent tracker and kisame well. u know
    *jose*
    ok welllets see how you like this!!!!!
    JAGON!!!!
    *the five genin watch in amazement*
    *fades out*

    *PF*
    go titan kill them all
    *titan*
    yes sir
    *titan walks slowly twoards the sand defenders*
    *genin in the sand village*
    lets go *run to titan and try to fight him but all die instantly*

    Q:
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMG NO!


    TO BE CONTINUED


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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:30

    2 thumbs up!
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:33

    why thank you
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:34

    ur welcome :heart:
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    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:34

    Damn Choshi...you're good...
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:38

    thanks renden...scince i didnt make the manga writing team i just decided to make one of my own...u will be in there soon..oops spoiler. :D

    and so will crispin.
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    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:40

    and you???
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:42

    cool!
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:43

    ooooh i'll be there...everybody i like will be in there
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:47

    *smiles to choushi*
    write ur heart out!
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    Post by Renden2005 on Sat Sep 22 2007, 01:47

    yea...it'll be awesome...i'm gonna have to post my fanfic...
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    Post by Furaiigon on Sat Sep 22 2007, 08:13

    LOVE IT I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! :XD:
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 09:41

    thanx furaiigon
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:31

    put up another chapter guys...ENJOY!!!!

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    Post by -j0$3- on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:36

    aww mang
    this is nice!
    :P
    you shouldve used me and q's fight for example
    i like it
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    Post by Furaiigon on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:37

    WOOT!!! GO CHOUSHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I wouldnt be suprised if this really happend (the story)
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:40

    thanks for the comments.. oh and remember if you have any constructve critisism...
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    Post by quater on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:52

    That was actually pretty hardcore.

    Choushi, I mean wow you really did a good job on this I like how you incorporated the site like that. You are a fairly good writer.
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    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:52

    nice!

    i should put up a fanfic too >//< but I suck
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    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:54

    i am happy that u enjoyed it kazekage sama....i'm gonna put some more people on here...idk if i should make a third chapter now or next week.
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by quater on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:56

    Choushi wrote:i am happy that u enjoyed it kazekage sama....i'm gonna put some more people on here...idk if i should make a third chapter now or next week.

    Wait a couple days build up the suspense for it ^_^
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 10:59

    yup...i 'll wait
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by happyangel on Sat Sep 22 2007, 11:00

    wow ^^ that was good :D
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Choushi on Sat Sep 22 2007, 11:04

    thanks...
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    Re: WOTN FF BY CHOUSHI RENDEN and KAZEKAGE Q

    Post by Q on Sat Sep 22 2007, 14:11

    i like it!

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