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    I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Wed Jul 29 2009, 17:30

    I'm making a another Fanfic.

    I'm thinking about making it about how a person grew up from nothing and then achieved something what others thought he couldn't. It going to kind be like the game called Fable for the XBox. But very different storyline.

    Once I get everything right I'm going to need characters.

    Ok here are two characters so far.

    Q-Leader of the Sand ninjs or named as Quater
    Ama-Vice Kage
    Neji or KKQ-Setsuna the Mist Kage.
    SSS-Shini a boy ninja who kind of just started from the sand village.
    Renden-a boy that just started as well.
    Kugo(Tenzo)-a bad rogue ninja from the glacier village
    Kitaro-Tenzo's little brother,he is also a rogue glacier village ninja


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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Jul 29 2009, 17:42

    I wanna be a dude!
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Wed Jul 29 2009, 17:44

    Why? your gonna be the Mist Kage that in the middle of the story or something meets with Q. Or 3 of the sand ninjas.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Jul 29 2009, 17:47

    I can't be a dude Mist Kage?
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Wed Jul 29 2009, 17:48

    I guess you can.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by amaterasu on Wed Jul 29 2009, 18:25

    Wait, am I sand's vice kage or Mist's vice kage?


    or just a vice kage of no particular village, or maybe for rent, or something, or for all villages?
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by SickSelfishSyQo on Wed Jul 29 2009, 18:28

    KarateKeyaQ wrote:I wanna be a dude!

    Don't copy me, man.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Wed Jul 29 2009, 18:30

    Ama your the Vice Kage of the mist village.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Jul 29 2009, 20:26

    SickSelfishSycho wrote:
    KarateKeyaQ wrote:I wanna be a dude!

    Don't copy me, man.
    I wouldn't dream of it.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by SickSelfishSyQo on Wed Jul 29 2009, 20:33

    KarateKeyaQ wrote:
    SickSelfishSycho wrote:
    KarateKeyaQ wrote:I wanna be a dude!

    Don't copy me, man.
    I wouldn't dream of it.

    Xp
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Thu Jul 30 2009, 15:22

    So far I got 2 and a half pages wrote. Which right now it kind of sounds boring since its the bginning of the story. But trust me it will get more actiony.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by amaterasu on Fri Jul 31 2009, 18:00

    King_Of_Blades wrote:Ama your the Vice Kage of the mist village.

    Okay
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Aug 01 2009, 15:08

    I will post the First Chapter when I have alot of time on my hands. Since it is 3 and a half pages long.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Sun Aug 02 2009, 02:40

    Hey, I'm game. Go ahead and pick a name, because I'm not sure how well "Pein" will go down :P

    Or, you don't have to put me in. I'm still reading it >D
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by quater on Sun Aug 02 2009, 06:27

    If SSS and KKQ can be dudes then I resubmit my request to be of a special persona, too.

    Spoiler:

    I really don't find it all that unreasonable.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Aug 03 2009, 13:36

    You could a person that helps Shinji(SSS),Bano,and Renden out in something.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Aug 03 2009, 13:45

    One day in the Sand Village,there lived three ninjas,who just passed their first exams. These three ninjas were named,Bano,Renden,and Shinji. They were the best of friends,but they graduated from three different classes. They were about to go out into the world and explore. Somewhere deep in the Sand Village. "Hey,Renden",said Bano as he saw Renden near-by. "Hiya,Bano",replied Renden as he walked up to Bano. "It seems to be a coincidence meeting you guys here,don't you think?",asked Shinji as he stood up. "I think so too",replied Renden. "Hmm,my belly is growling,you guys up for a bite to eat?",asked Bano with a smile on his face. "Sure,I guess,I'm a little hungry myself",answered Shinji. "Hmm,I guess we could go grab a quick bite to eat",replied Renden.



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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Aug 05 2009, 07:34

    .........More? xD
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by SickSelfishSyQo on Wed Aug 05 2009, 15:11

    I second that motion.
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    Re: I'm making a story.

    Post by quater on Wed Aug 05 2009, 19:13

    Thinking of SSS as a guy is weird. Especially the name Shinji. A blih name choice I knew a Shinji from another site and I disliked him very much.

    Otherwise, its kind of short man.
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    Post by SickSelfishSyQo on Wed Aug 05 2009, 23:09

    I am disliked by association...
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    Post by King_Of_Blades on Thu Aug 06 2009, 22:23

    I'll have to find more time to post. Because I start school tomorrow. Freshman year :(.
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    Post by SickSelfishSyQo on Thu Aug 06 2009, 23:19

    Excuses!!! XP
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    Post by King_Of_Blades on Fri Aug 07 2009, 03:48

    Well,its true. Lol. XP. I got school. -_-. I can't even go to sleep.
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    Post by SickSelfishSyQo on Fri Aug 07 2009, 06:10

    Freshman year is like the year of learning about high school.

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