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    Blood

    Post by judai12 on Mon May 11 2009, 21:55

    My vampire poem:F

    As the blood runs
    runs down my mouth
    the tase of it
    so sweet and yummy
    as i pull away
    tears run down my face
    I start to cry
    what have I done!
    looking down
    down at the bloodly sight
    of what I have done
    I try
    try to run off
    to somewere
    somewere safe
    but no
    i can not be safe
    for I am
    I am a vampire

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    Re: Blood

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Jun 13 2009, 19:15

    eery and gory?

    but good. ^^
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    Re: Blood

    Post by judai12 on Thu Jun 25 2009, 14:14

    thank u^^
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    Re: Blood

    Post by Temari on Wed Jul 29 2009, 14:21

    Sounds more like sentences from a story to me than a poem.
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    Re: Blood

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Wed Jul 29 2009, 15:32

    True. But you gotta admit. It was pretty good.
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    Re: Blood

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Jul 29 2009, 15:44

    was a cute lil poem
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    Re: Blood

    Post by judai12 on Sat Aug 01 2009, 11:33

    thank u cris and james

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