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    Ending Road

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Apr 26 2009, 17:04

    All dressed up in your proud school colored gown
    The maroon flowing in the wind as everyone rises for the principal...the eyes upon us in the town
    Tears come to girls eyes....guys cheer and wooting...the embracing of hugs from family and friends...
    As my fading memory blurs back to another time

    "Wait hold on...no i'm not ready!"....so many questions rampage through my mind as all those dooming and frantic questions...hit me like sonic boom...
    Knocking me down...lost with dizzyness..can I face this truth?
    Only you can be the answer for no one sees it better than you
    Going through those crowded hallways that you've always known
    Seeing those familiar faces...and laughing at the ridicolous teachers is all i've known
    Taking long and boring test of the day
    oh how you remember the horrible times...
    Tick Tock as you wait for the day to be dead and gone
    Trying asking yourself...can you really see yourself gone?

    Put yourself now in a senior's shoes...walk that path
    Being at the top of the school is no simple math
    Remember all the laughter..and good times you've had
    Don't let those be blurred...once you move onto your college fad
    The fights that went around school...the early days and hanging out snack...seem like such simple rules
    Enjoying the bad times with your classmates and good ones...those can't be replaced by some university zone

    Highschool its one giant accomplishment in our soon to be adult life
    What a great one it would be..don't you see?
    The shouting of families across in the bleachers
    the seniors taking their last photo pictures
    Bring me back to that of reality...as i seemlessly walk upon to the podeum
    Humming the graduation song..as we go on we remeber
    Tears stain my cheeks for I am filled glee
    Forever free we will be
    Locking this moment in time to my soul
    I take my diploma...and i will meet you at the end of this road

    "You may toss your hats!! Congratz to Class of 2010!!!
    Maroon and gold fill the sky..I won't let this treasured moment pass me by
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by Always-Abby on Sun Apr 26 2009, 17:06

    Verrrrry nice Cris :D
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Apr 26 2009, 19:23

    thanks abby
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Mon Apr 27 2009, 01:02

    Awwwwwwesome!!!!! :DDD
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by judai12 on Mon Apr 27 2009, 20:56

    i love the end "You may toss your hats!! Congratz to Class of 2010!!!
    Maroon and gold fill the sky..I won't let this treasured moment pass me by"
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by gaara12 on Tue Apr 28 2009, 16:44

    wow. nice poem crispen
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Tue May 05 2009, 17:13

    I liked the ending, too!

    The seniors graduating this year must have definitely moved you.
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by D-Dei on Tue May 05 2009, 21:17

    Awww. (:
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    Re: Ending Road

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed May 06 2009, 00:20

    it just made me think of next yr so yeah the seniors have moved me. my friends at school & here on wotn. @ titan

    thanks titan & dei

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