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    poem help!

    Post by GL on Sun Apr 19 2009, 14:35

    k, so im writing a poem for my comfirmation graduation ^^ (haha it rhymed) i have to talk about love and relationships. i decided to make a poem to show what i think love is. ^^

    this is what i have come up with so far:

    i took a chance to open up for you, letting the egoist inside swallow me. trying slowly come close, to get the chance to hold your heart. i want to help you when you fall, and then later stroke your hands that i carefully hold. the only thing i will ask for, is that you try to se how i love you. youre the only one i want to belong to, and i will never destroy the trust you have built up.

    (it sounds better in swedish, becasue it rhymes. (:

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