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    Post by Little_Shiro on Wed Apr 01 2009, 00:18

    Life

    When we were born we were not alike,
    Faces, minds and different frights,
    You make your future, u make the calls,
    You each walk a different hall,
    There are people from a different race,
    They all have a seperate pace,
    The outcome of life is all the same,
    No one winner , No one shame,
    Your life is your choice,
    You follow your own voice,
    Chose how you live,Chose how you die,
    Just try not to live a lie,
    Its Your life your choice your care,
    Your cloths, your look, your hair,
    your hopes,your dreams, your fears,
    But everyone crys the same tears,
    Everyone has the choice of there life,
    Everyone choses to be mean or nice,
    Everyone's Blood is always red,
    But in the end Everyone's dead.


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    Re: Life

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Apr 01 2009, 00:20

    wow stunning poem shiro, i'm amazed.
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    Re: Life

    Post by Little_Shiro on Wed Apr 01 2009, 16:01

    Thank you,
    i was bored yesterday because i took a nap and couldnt go back to sleep so I thought i should make a poem xD
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    Re: Life

    Post by gaara12 on Wed Apr 01 2009, 17:50

    woahz
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    Re: Life

    Post by judai12 on Wed Apr 01 2009, 17:57

    nice ^^
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    Re: Life

    Post by GL on Thu Apr 02 2009, 06:55

    great poem shiro! love it^^
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    Re: Life

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Apr 04 2009, 11:22

    Well damn, wasn't expecting that last part.

    It was good though. Awesome, Shiro.
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    Re: Life

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Apr 04 2009, 12:23

    I have many puncuation and spelling errors that im too lazy to change
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    Re: Life

    Post by judai12 on Fri Jun 26 2009, 12:35

    but its still good

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