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    Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Mar 30 2009, 13:43

    Hard Times

    People from all walks of life
    We all have problems and strife
    We are all forced to overcome,
    But we are all left with some,
    Because we have to live on
    We have to overcome them before we're gone

    We all lose things we've loved
    Some of those memories are shoved
    Into the back of our mind,
    And forgotten in time
    We lose all sense of the problem
    Some times we completely forget them

    Some of those hard times stay with us,
    Forever we live on with these memories we must,
    We all tried to get help
    But stuck with the cards we are dealt
    The recurring pain is forever painful
    Even though we all were careful

    Some we overcome but are left
    With thosae past memories of ourself
    Trying and trying to forget
    But the outcome was already set
    Now the time has come
    To face that outcome

    Are you ready to make it change
    Some people say its just out of their range
    But some keep going and going
    To overcome is what we're pursueing
    Those bad memories had past
    But the memory still lives on like a discarded cast

    Now those memories are behind,
    Us the past life we're assigned
    But we must live on and we do
    We all must start a new leaf,a new
    A new day with new,
    Memories starting with the morning dew
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by NinjaPleez on Mon Mar 30 2009, 14:13

    Oh Yeah!

    Pretty deep.
    And motivating!
    Makes me wanna get up and go kick some ass!
    STFU!
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Mar 30 2009, 14:14

    thnx NP
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by Little_Shiro on Mon Mar 30 2009, 15:30

    awesome peopm but i didnt like the the lines

    Now the time has come
    To face that outcome

    there both "come"
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Mar 30 2009, 15:37

    Dang. I knew something was wrong.I wrote that poem about eleven o'clock last night I was sleepy lol
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Mon Mar 30 2009, 16:35

    Awwwww, it was good.

    Except, for the first line: People from all walks of life.
    I didn't understand how to read it or what you meant =/

    But other then that, it was gooooddd :D
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Mar 30 2009, 16:38

    People from all races thats what I meant,and thank you.
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by amaterasu on Mon Mar 30 2009, 16:56

    t;was a good read
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Mar 30 2009, 16:58

    Thank you ama.
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Mar 30 2009, 23:10

    it was really good..a lil confusing in some parts but deep james^^ good job
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Mon Mar 30 2009, 23:49

    thanks sis
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Tue Mar 31 2009, 15:40

    Nice :D
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    Re: Hard Times

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Tue Mar 31 2009, 17:53

    thnx pein

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