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    Never Forgotten

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Mar 22 2009, 03:23

    Pounding...pounding..is that you ...?
    Are you the one who's beating in my heart a new...?
    Zooming past the ocean of people
    I still can't help but see your distant glowing spirit
    The leaves shuffle through like clattering feet
    tenderly poisoning my senses like the rush of a waterfall

    Poised along the rainy shore...the clouds wander seemlessly through the blankets of night sky
    Like an interrrupting phase within nature your my cause to want to change the hands of time
    Let me push back those seemlessly rusted hands of steel
    I push and push coming forth to only see that i've run out of the strength...
    You were the only one who i wanted to move those hands...
    it can't be me or I...just as the bees can never not cease to die
    The cloud cry with the pain that can't be budged through those rusting hands of time

    Never forgotten...never forgotten...is what you are
    for the hands my love in time you had sent down from straight above
    Repeat the past...repeat the past...he said is something i can do
    But couldn't see that the past can't be repeated...like the night of new moon...it can not be repeated
    Once you've taken that path...you must walk it like any other...you do the math
    Swayed passing through the breeze of unforgotten dreams
    Your never forgotten...looking throught the breeze of the night sky
    those words are stained in the blissness of these naked eyes
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by knssquad on Sun Mar 22 2009, 03:31

    <3
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sun Mar 22 2009, 03:44

    aww thats a GREAT POEM sis its awesome
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    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sun Mar 22 2009, 11:26

    Awhhhh.
    The last eight lines are my favorite :3
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by Always-Abby on Sun Mar 22 2009, 12:12

    Awww. Very very nice Cris.
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by gaara12 on Sun Mar 22 2009, 13:06

    that is one of ur best poems crispen.
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by Darns on Sun Mar 22 2009, 16:57

    :2thumbs: I love it
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by judai12 on Sun Mar 22 2009, 20:30

    really nice cris ^^
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Mar 23 2009, 00:51

    thanks everyone
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by judai12 on Mon Mar 23 2009, 20:10

    ur welcome
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by amaterasu on Wed Mar 25 2009, 21:20

    wow, that was a good poem, you sure have talent Crispin
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by naruto13227 on Wed Mar 25 2009, 22:39

    beautiful..
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Mar 27 2009, 08:58

    thank you ama & naruto
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by neon kun on Fri Mar 27 2009, 10:41

    very nice, cris.
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Mar 27 2009, 18:43

    thanks mikel
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    Re: Never Forgotten

    Post by Shugo on Tue Mar 31 2009, 14:29

    its great =D

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