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    Fear

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Tue Feb 03 2009, 20:32

    Just made this up today. It's for my English class.
    FEAR.

    It is the place we go,

    when all bad things make us woe.

    It is the stranger in the shadows,

    the serial killer, an unimaginable foe.

    It makes up delusional, makes us helpless,

    turns all our courage into cowardice.

    It is the evil of the night,

    the bats, the devils, the ghouls as they take flight.

    It will grip you, overwhelm you, and make you tremble,

    singing an omnious tempo.

    It may just be a four letter word,

    but it attacks us all; Wildebeest being struck in herds.

    It corrupts our minds, takes away our common sense,

    it fares well against every defense.

    Fear is deep inside us all,

    and it will stay there,

    laughing and pointing,

    whenever you fall.




    Good, bad, horrible?
    Lemme know.


    Last edited by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Feb 04 2009, 13:45; edited 1 time in total
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    Re: Fear

    Post by Always-Abby on Tue Feb 03 2009, 21:22

    Amazing :O
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    Re: Fear

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Feb 03 2009, 22:09

    Awesome Keya ^_^
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    Re: Fear

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Feb 03 2009, 22:18

    that was amazing keya
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    Re: Fear

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Tue Feb 03 2009, 22:43

    Other then the few typoes, it's great! :D
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    Re: Fear

    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Wed Feb 04 2009, 03:12

    Sasori Kung fu masta wrote:Other then the few typoes, it's great! :D

    Few typoes? I only saw one :P
    And one spelling error

    I loved it, Keya ^_^
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    Re: Fear

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Wed Feb 04 2009, 13:44

    xDD I'll turn it in fucked up too.

    Thanksss :D
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    Re: Fear

    Post by Laura-Chan on Thu Feb 05 2009, 10:35

    ^_^ That is amazing!
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    Re: Fear

    Post by Darnás on Fri Feb 06 2009, 14:19

    Darnás luvz it

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