The Red Ribbon of Emotion

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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 04:58

    Commitment
    it was something we shared for we had cared for each other it was true
    in every stare You changed my life, you made my heart beat more in
    special ways....We shared one unique love, it was powerful like the
    "one" you believe up above. Emotionally distilled and so loved I
    believed you were a dove sent out of love All the feelings i felt
    through you....they still follow me through and through....as though
    you enrich my blood. We had a deep enticing bond stronger than any
    other...You and me, we were full on lovers...Oh virgo, oh virgo it so
    hard to let you go....I met a man who loved me soulfully for me
    :
    Hopefully I left you with splendid times we were something yet so
    intertwined thats something that i'll keep forever in my mind. Your
    faithful young man, who loved his music..his girl..but seemed lost in
    who he was. You Lii spread your angel wings with the passion of the
    lord in your blood



    May thy lord reach out and touch your soul, for you deserve it with a
    webbed fate of faith you so ever spoken. Don't ever doubt "you", you
    were the man that i loved. You were the spark in my life, teaching me
    many things. And yet I fantasize of a ring throughout my dreams. For I
    have flaws in all, but I stand tall through poems and all. My feelings
    stand deep inside my soul they were for reaching out gently to caress
    your soul. I leave you with the hopes that i some how enriched or made
    you experience new things. Don't ever think that you broke my heart for
    what has ocurred.
    You opened emotions thats enough to stir inside my feelings, that were found like a cure
    I never been one to hold a grudge...and i never will especially the one who gave his love
    You spoke with passion drooped upon your eyes...I looked with compassion and felt abrupt to be mystified...
    I will always cherish the memories that were there in our love
    nothing can break the emotional connection that i felt for you tied to our hearts

    Someday I long to see of you and me
    together forever thats how I'd see
    The glass of love for you will never be broken..the cracks will seal and never cease to open
    I dedicate this poem for you...you know who you are..your the star who shined my night...
    with the lord in you who fills all your might

    So you will forever be free with my love for you to treasure...oh Meaalii
    you filled my heart with pleasure thats undoubtly expected forever and ever



    DEDICATED TO LII
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by NarutoBoyFreakah on Sat Jan 17 2009, 05:04

    beautiful Love
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 05:11

    thank you nbf
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Jan 17 2009, 11:38

    It's beautiful and amazing!
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by AkiQ on Sat Jan 17 2009, 12:00

    That was so sweet and beautiful Crispy.
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Laura-Chan on Sat Jan 17 2009, 12:22

    Wow, it's beautiful. So full of emotion it's such a special bond that you shared! *ish starting to cry because she's listening to sad music too*

    ^ Best. Poem. Ever =P
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Always-Abby on Sat Jan 17 2009, 13:09

    Oh, Cris. So beautiful.
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 13:58

    thanks abby, anna, aki and LC
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 14:10

    soo pretty i love it,its sooo good^^
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Isabel on Sat Jan 17 2009, 14:10

    Jasmin...........like before........this brought tears to my eyes because it also reminds me of a love that will never be........now i have Carlos and he deserves me to be ever faithful loyal and loving
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 14:19

    thanks izzy & judai
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Jan 17 2009, 15:05

    Awwwwwwwwwwwww D: So sweet.
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Choushi on Sat Jan 17 2009, 19:44

    aww...dude...makes me sob for real...
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 19:51

    I'm glad that this touched you Lii, i worked all day yesterday on this poem btw classes.

    its there for you always.
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Jan 17 2009, 21:15

    aww D: its beautiful cris ^_^
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by judai12 on Sat Jan 17 2009, 21:51

    ur welcome cris^^
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Jan 18 2009, 07:42

    thanks shiro and keya
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Darns on Tue Jan 20 2009, 09:39

    ... Beautiful...
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Jan 20 2009, 10:42

    thank you darnas
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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Mon Feb 16 2009, 23:32

    Fantastic, what an emotional piece to write, it must not have been easy

    I'm still awestruck.



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    Re: The Red Ribbon of Emotion

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Sun Feb 22 2009, 14:44

    I bow down to the master of poems -bows-

    That was amazing!

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