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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    Unspoken Words

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Dec 11 2008, 10:44

    Twisting, yielding at yet that is unspoken
    Regretting worth saying nothings a token
    You speak through me as I do to you
    I see into silky green eyes for the truth
    My confusion is subtle, it has become my title

    You say that there is a love for me
    but you think it cannot be
    Waiting, waiting, waiting at times it can be irritating
    You've pierced my heart oh so long ago
    these feelings are shanked and my heart bleeds whenever you go
    He says that he's only here for me
    but is that something I can truly believe
    We've held a bond like no other, as special as that day in August...

    Those words you say spread like a fathom of disease
    But I dare speak of you and me, is there more, is there anything that stands between
    Things may be chaotic right now, I hope we can overcome and look in awe

    I'm not here of benefit of you
    I stand here staring beyond my view
    There is no lust, all we have is trust
    I dare make you turn away
    For you my love it has not flown away

    Yet I say no one is perfect action or word
    But truth behold, these words...
    I say "I love you forever" night and day
    Can't you see this is what I say for I have not gone astray.
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by Darns on Thu Dec 11 2008, 11:39

    *blink blink*
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Dec 11 2008, 18:53

    Its really amazing, Onee-chan.

    <3 like usual. --#1 fan
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by knssquad on Thu Dec 11 2008, 23:56

    :O Nee, I'm your Numbah 1 fan ^.^

    Beautiful
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by Shugo on Fri Dec 12 2008, 00:43

    Crying its soo pretty
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Dec 12 2008, 01:55

    thank you
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by judai12 on Fri Dec 12 2008, 16:28

    really good i love it cris,its soooo pretty
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Fri Dec 12 2008, 22:51

    pretty darn good there, cris ^^
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Fri Dec 12 2008, 23:26

    first of all; it rhymed! ;D i love rhyming.

    D: it is slightly sad..but very pretty ^_^ good jobs!
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Dec 13 2008, 00:08

    KarateKeyaQ wrote:first of all; it rhymed! ;D i love rhyming.

    D: it is slightly sad..but very pretty ^_^ good jobs!

    Thats what made me like it :3
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Dec 16 2008, 01:15

    thanks shiro^^
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by oath_keeper06 on Sat Dec 27 2008, 09:26

    its awesome..XD sorry took so long to see this poem...
    absolutely....<3333..X3
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Dec 27 2008, 14:50

    its okay^^ thankies
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Sat Dec 27 2008, 15:13

    i loved it, i envy how you can come up with them. ^_^
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    Re: Unspoken Words

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Dec 27 2008, 15:14

    thank u tsuki, eh ^^;

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