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    CrispinFreemanWatcher16
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    The tide

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Dec 06 2008, 11:28

    The Tide
    She waits along the beauty of the ocean ashore
    standing on the shore with lonesome eyes of never before
    The ghastly clouds cover the sky with their grays of complexion
    whispers gather through her troubled heart "Do I speak perfection?"
    the tides creep upon the shore...erasing the past of that forgotten lore

    She feels no wind, no hope just that of a lost memory
    the pools of her evergreen eyes cast of nothing but a dead scenery
    the crash of ocean waves drives her to confession
    the tides wrap around her ankles saying "you are a blessing"
    The tides erase her footprints of grief and sorrow

    Tears bring anew pains that pound her heartbeat
    "Can I endure furthermore or will i be torn?"
    The tide rises and the tide falls,it shows it like that of a rollercoaster
    Its the cycle of love as I can feel it drawing closer and closer
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    Re: The tide

    Post by AkiQ on Sat Dec 06 2008, 11:42

    I love it Crispy.
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    Re: The tide

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Sat Dec 06 2008, 11:44

    It's beautiful Onee-chan...Simpley amazing.
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    Re: The tide

    Post by Temari on Sat Dec 06 2008, 11:54

    its awesome. I wish i could write poems as good as u can.
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    Re: The tide

    Post by theBOSS. on Sat Dec 06 2008, 11:59

    damn.
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    Re: The tide

    Post by neon kun on Sat Dec 06 2008, 12:09

    OMG!! SO PURTEH, CRISPY CHAN!!! Puppy Dog Eyes i loves it!
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    Re: The tide

    Post by judai12 on Sat Dec 06 2008, 12:12

    awwaaw its soo cute^^
    its really good^_^
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    Re: The tide

    Post by Darns on Sat Dec 06 2008, 12:28

    I agree with it.

    That is one beautiful poem...
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    Re: The tide

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Dec 06 2008, 12:30

    thank u everyone for ur comments^^
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    Re: The tide

    Post by judai12 on Sat Dec 06 2008, 12:36

    ur welcome
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    Re: The tide

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sun Dec 07 2008, 13:28

    awesome cris ^_^
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    Re: The tide

    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Sun Dec 07 2008, 13:40

    It's beautiful :3
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    Re: The tide

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Dec 07 2008, 16:25

    thanks
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    Re: The tide

    Post by Hell*H*Opens on Sun Dec 07 2008, 17:21

    Sugoi~! I love your poems, Crispin-san. ^^ You have a beautiful gift.
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    Re: The tide

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Dec 07 2008, 19:18

    thank you!!! That means a lot to me.

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