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    Tears-Song

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Sun Nov 30 2008, 18:24

    At least it's over now,
    You've said what you feel,
    I can't say you were right,
    Couldn't make you a deal.
    And now, I, am lonely.
    Your answer ruined me.
    My heart is now locked,
    Cuz your love was the key.

    Your arms,
    Are the only things that are beside me,
    If only you could be behind me,
    Hold me and keep goin'
    Your heart,
    Is the one that keeps me beating,
    If only you didn't pretend,
    These tear drops will never end.

    These scars stay forever,
    Damaging my heart,
    But it was your choice,
    And you didn't want to start.
    And now, I, am lonely.
    Your answer killed me today.
    If I live, If I die,
    You hurt me every way.

    Your arms,
    Are the only things that are beside me,
    If only you could be behind me,
    Hold me and keep goin'
    Your heart,
    Is the one that keeps me beating,
    If only you didn't pretend,
    These tear drops will never end.

    And maybe that day,
    In my dreams I'll wait,
    For the time we are together,
    And together, we'll be faith.
    And maybe that day,
    In my deams I'll stay,
    So together will be ever,
    My love won't go away.

    Your arms,
    Are the only things that are beside me,
    If only you could be behind me,
    Hold me and keep goin'
    Your heart,
    Is the one that keeps me beating,
    If only you didn't pretend,
    These tear drops will never end.
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    Re: Tears-Song

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Nov 30 2008, 18:36

    I rly like it, it has powerful emotions in the song.

    thats cool u write songs too^^
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    Re: Tears-Song

    Post by CLAIRVOYANTdisease on Sun Nov 30 2008, 18:46

    That's beautiful.
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    Re: Tears-Song

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Sun Nov 30 2008, 19:32

    Thank you ^_^
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    Re: Tears-Song

    Post by judai12 on Sun Nov 30 2008, 20:48

    really good
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    Re: Tears-Song

    Post by gaara12 on Mon Dec 01 2008, 20:59

    thats a good poem.

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