A tale of Drowned Memories

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    A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Sun Nov 09 2008, 19:43

    Sitting all alone on a swing, her head hanging, tears rolling down her pale face. The boy, smiling, smirking more, sitting next to the girl, nothing but a memory. The happiness in the scene had disaperated. The bright eletric sun, now a dull gray. The freshly dewed green grass, now a wilting brown.The boy had sucked the happiness from the girl and moved it with him, as she heard the deep crack from within her chest. Her depresion dripping like water from an overflowing dam. The tears stopped. The girl,with a face of twisted pain on her face, fell out of the swing and onto her knees, slowly feeling the life being eaten by her misery. Her movments stopped. Her face calm, she fell completly, her stomach making contact with the ground, producing a dull thud. She lie cold and still like porcelin, a result of misery and deepresion drowning memories not enough to prevent killing the girl.
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Yoyo on Sun Nov 09 2008, 19:47

    Bloodied up
    Holy cow.
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Sun Nov 09 2008, 19:48

    what?
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Yoyo on Sun Nov 09 2008, 19:49

    It was good. Surprisingly dark, but good.
    I hadn't had a chance to use the smilie, so I figured I'd throw it in. Ignore it. ^_^
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Sun Nov 09 2008, 19:49

    XD lol
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Yoyo on Sun Nov 09 2008, 19:51

    Ish what I do.
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Sun Nov 09 2008, 20:07

    hm, i thought what you did was be annoying? XD jk!
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Yoyo on Sun Nov 09 2008, 20:12

    Yes, I have completed my mission here! *wooshes out of thread*
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Mon Nov 10 2008, 01:42

    i really liked. ^__^
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Kiami on Mon Nov 10 2008, 09:40

    O.o WOW.
    That was AMAZING.
    Its was dark, like Yoyo
    at stated, but the imagery
    and the way the
    words captured you.
    I love it. ^-^
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by sabakunogaara on Mon Nov 10 2008, 10:10

    dark, but really good, i loved it
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    Re: A tale of Drowned Memories

    Post by Shattered_Soul_98 on Mon Nov 10 2008, 21:07

    thanks all ^_^

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