a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

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    a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Wed Nov 05 2008, 18:24

    Battlefeild

    Battlefields are always bloody
    Wars cost multitudes of money
    People in the war
    Are lost forever more


    They only try to settle the score
    But only raise the Deathcount more
    They hide their weapons in places like stores(talking about our reloution)
    They try to get into the enemy's cores

    The General tells his men " left right left"
    Some soldiers are reduced to theft
    Soldiers fire their guns
    With the impact and the heat of a thousand suns

    The battlefield is always filled with sound
    To earth the soldier's ghosts are bound
    There is soldiers on every battle mound
    The generals orders are from the England's king with his crown

    They try to be brave
    Cause theirs lives to save
    The soldiers marched at the generals orders
    Into the enemy's quarters
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by Little_Shiro on Wed Nov 05 2008, 21:02

    Awesome it ryhmes :D
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by azuki_dashi16 on Thu Nov 06 2008, 17:55

    Broken Oooh...It's very good Jesshomaru!
    How long did it take you?
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Thu Nov 06 2008, 18:02

    I'm sure Endless would appreciate such a dediction as this!
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by Endless Nothing on Fri Nov 07 2008, 00:19

    Well i am no critic but i must say it is a good poem.
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Fri Nov 07 2008, 20:55

    thanks little shiro and endless and titan
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Fri Nov 07 2008, 20:56

    and azuki it took me about 30 minutes
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Fri Nov 07 2008, 23:11

    Sweet poem!
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    Post by King_Of_Blades on Fri Nov 07 2008, 23:15

    thanks
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Fri Nov 07 2008, 23:18

    No problem.
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by Hell*H*Opens on Sat Nov 08 2008, 05:43

    Awe!

    I love it! ^^
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    Re: a poem called the battlefield that idedciated to endless

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Nov 08 2008, 15:43

    thanks

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