Breaking Tables (Poem)

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    Breaking Tables (Poem)

    Post by Always-Abby on Mon Nov 03 2008, 23:30

    A few hurtful words may be all you intend,
    Maybe a few yells here and there.
    But I know that your mind will bend,
    And I know you will lose care.
    Slam a door, punch a wall,
    These things I can only hear.
    I cannot imagine at all,
    How you make this fear.

    I stay a level down, trembling on the floor.
    I still hear unfriendly pounds,
    Even from behind the door.
    I bite my lip to stop the sounds.

    My legs bring me up as a shatter emmits,
    Through this house of madness.
    With this home barely lit,
    My courage has become less,
    As you continue with the fit.

    I make it halfway up the stairs,
    Small paws following behind.
    More booming yells are dared,
    And now it's the front door I need to find.
    You make me run away,
    You make me fall in fear.
    Do you not like me being this way,
    Or do you mean to shed these tears.

    Breaking tables, I'd love to hear how.
    I heard the shatter, I heard the yells,
    But not to superhero 'pow'.
    The door gives off painful shrills,
    Opening it being painful too.
    But as soothing air kisses my ears,
    I wonder if I'm really afraid of you.

    Breaking a table with skills is one thing,
    But throwing a brother is just cruel.
    Not only is the table breaking,
    But so is this family, you fool.

    I stay away from you for a few,
    Just to clear my mind.
    I know that we cannot start anew,
    Being that you're blind.
    Blind to love, blind to trust
    Blind to everything you see.
    Breaking tables has to be your must
    Because that is blind to me.

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    Sorry it's so long, and sorry of it doesn't make much sense.
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    Re: Breaking Tables (Poem)

    Post by quater on Tue Nov 04 2008, 20:04

    That was really good.
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    Re: Breaking Tables (Poem)

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Tue Nov 04 2008, 22:15

    Awesomness Abby!
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    Re: Breaking Tables (Poem)

    Post by Always-Abby on Mon Nov 10 2008, 19:08

    Thanks ^_^

    My poems always turn out pretty depressing, I've noticed >_>
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    Re: Breaking Tables (Poem)

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Mon Nov 10 2008, 19:12

    i liked it, i thought it was good, especially how it rhymed. ^_^
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    Re: Breaking Tables (Poem)

    Post by Kiami on Mon Nov 10 2008, 19:41

    Superior.
    I simply adore
    this poem.

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