The Eve of Halloween

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    The Eve of Halloween

    Post by UchihaAyame on Fri Oct 31 2008, 22:48

    Maya was sitting on the school playground's swing
    She was thinking deeply
    Rico came up to her and asked
    "So, Maya...how long
    are you going to keep this up?"
    She looked up at him but couldn't say a word
    "Its been over between us for a LONG time"
    He focused his eyes on her and said
    "Look! I found someone new, LET IT GO!"
    He ordered her.
    Since Maya was never the type of person
    to fight back,she just got up and left
    Apparently, she wasn't the type that gives up
    easily either
    that night. she followed Rico
    But it was only an awful site she saw
    She saw him kiss his new girl
    the same way he used to kiss Her
    She couldn't take it!
    She ran off and wasn't seen again
    the next morning
    That was because she had already committed suicide
    "So, the fool's done it! The ultimate act...
    Maya.Maya.Maya!
    It isn't always about you"
    Rico said shaking his head

    Two years later, Rico had married his woman
    and lived a luxiurious life
    He forgot all about Maya until the night before halloween
    that year
    His wife was dressed just like Maya
    "What are you dresses as?"
    Rico asked.
    "Your dumb girlfriend from highschool"
    she said.
    "Oh, right! I forgot about her"
    "You've always admired her looks
    and charm, I want the same"
    she laughed.
    Rico placed his arms around her waist and said
    "I see you're jealous,but why now?
    Tommorrow is Halloween"
    he chuckled.
    "I just wanted to see if you will like me more
    dressed like her"
    She suddenly had a headache and it seemed like
    someone whispered...
    "That's where you're wrong"
    Rico's wife started running crazy.
    As she ran, her clothes were torn off her.
    Someone whispered again
    "Only I an wear those"
    She stopped running
    when she reached the veranda.
    Rico caught up to her and asked
    "What's wrong with you?"
    He tried to touch his wife but
    a mysterious force prevented his hand from
    touching her.
    She spoke in a mysterious, familiar voice
    "Hello again Rico!" she smiled.
    She looked like someone Rico knew
    as she smiled.
    "Say goodbye to your wife!"
    Just as she said that,
    Rico's wife jumped off the veranda.
    Rico fell to the floor covering his ears
    "Why? Why? Was that YOU, Maya?"
    He felt something behind him
    and a cold breath. She said
    "Yes, how dare you mock me?"
    Rico started running. Trying to get out
    of the house, he saw strange monsters.
    As he ran, he was saying
    "I don't believe, I don't believe!"
    He was tripped by a hand that appeared
    from the wall.
    "You cursed witch!"he yelled.
    He got up and opened the door to the outside.
    Instead, he saw the swing in the playground
    of his old school.
    He saw that scene where Maya was sitting on
    the swing and talked to him.
    When Maya walked out, the bright sunny day
    dissappeared and instead
    The dark,cold night appeared
    Maya was sitting on the swing
    This time, she was wearing a white, plain gown
    She had her hair untied and she looked dead
    Blood dripped from her forehead and hands
    On her wrists, she had marks suggesting
    She was chained
    And it was bleeding
    Her hands held the swing's ropes tightly
    Rico came closer and said
    "What's happened to you?"
    Maya got up and faced Rico.
    "You could have given me a second chance
    that time"
    Despite the chills Rico got, he blushed and said
    "Why didn't you visit me then?"
    Maya touched his left cheek with her cold hand
    and said
    "I couldn't take it...seeing you with that witch"
    She held both his hands and said
    "Come with me! Stay with me forever!
    We will never be apart!"
    Rico looked at her and said
    "I want to come with you, Maya!"
    Tears ran down his face as he said
    "I wan to come with you!"
    Flames surrounded the two as they embraced.
    They were never seen again after
    Midnight on the eve of Halloween...
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    Re: The Eve of Halloween

    Post by Little_Shiro on Fri Oct 31 2008, 22:53

    GOOD Story ^_^
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    Re: The Eve of Halloween

    Post by UchihaAyame on Fri Oct 31 2008, 22:54

    Wow! I just posted it! You read it THAT fast?!!!
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    Re: The Eve of Halloween

    Post by Little_Shiro on Fri Oct 31 2008, 23:07

    Im a speed reader To fly
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    Re: The Eve of Halloween

    Post by UchihaAyame on Fri Oct 31 2008, 23:08

    XD
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    Re: The Eve of Halloween

    Post by Little_Shiro on Fri Oct 31 2008, 23:16

    how did u think of it?
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    Re: The Eve of Halloween

    Post by UchihaAyame on Sat Nov 01 2008, 02:08

    I didn't which was the best part...I was just typing and stuff came up

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