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    Kiami
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    Poem!

    Post by Kiami on Thu Oct 30 2008, 19:19

    From the past mistakes that happed
    From the times that we've been through

    How can you still hold me?
    From what I put you through

    I betrayed
    I lied
    But to protect you
    And you let it slide?

    I don't really get it
    what runs through your mind?
    When you see me act like this
    Are you truely blind

    I can't take it anymore
    I looked from above
    I think im sure
    Your my true love

    I wont betray
    I wont lie
    I wont anymore
    I promise to try

    Keep me close
    Keep me by
    Keep me in the heart
    Thats warm inside

    Never cold
    Never mean
    these feelings fly
    I will never say goodbye...
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by jake989 on Thu Oct 30 2008, 19:26

    It's a very beautiful poem, and it shows some powerful emotions in it. Truely a great poem Kai!
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by Kiami on Thu Oct 30 2008, 19:36

    Awwe, thanks
    jake-kun. ^-^
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by Always-Abby on Thu Oct 30 2008, 19:59

    This is beautiful Kia ^_^ Great job.
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by Hell*H*Opens on Fri Oct 31 2008, 08:27

    Awe, amazing Nicole! ^^
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by UchihaAyame on Fri Oct 31 2008, 22:53

    This is cute!
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Nov 09 2008, 22:19

    greatly done with good emotions, kia.
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Mon Nov 10 2008, 01:32

    i loved it, the emotion you put into it was beautiful.
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by oath_keeper06 on Thu Nov 13 2008, 08:01

    kawaii..X3
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    Re: Poem!

    Post by Hell*H*Opens on Sat Nov 22 2008, 18:49

    I keep reading this one, too. xDD

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