"Joey" the internet shark

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    "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by quater on Fri Oct 24 2008, 23:47

    The seas were calm,
    as I looked at my palm,
    the oceans were stormin'.

    It was out of the calm,
    the rage of the sea,
    the beast got free.

    The internet ocean,
    unleashed a commotion,
    one that could not be stopped.

    The monster came,
    out of the village,
    deepest in pillage.

    And no man knew,
    the destruction it rue,
    or the terror awakened.

    Straight from mist,
    it loved it's pride,
    and those who saw it died.

    An internet shark,
    a rare breed and mark,
    and the seas turned red.

    I saw it myself,
    a site to remember,
    a crazy member.

    And though it's true,
    it's beauty was few,
    a wrath I couldn't forget.

    Those online were gone,
    I watched them fall,
    the mighty and tall.

    I worried gravely,
    I saw it bravely,
    that none would see to exist.

    He was a leader of sorts,
    but a shark underneath,
    something to bequeath.

    Conflict was strife,
    the battle for life,
    and yet I missed it go.

    The internet shark left,
    and yet it stayed,
    a phantom I thought I slayed.

    It's bloodthirst forever,
    but it made me clever,
    the battle not to be forgotten.

    Between us we warred,
    companion and nemesis,
    and there was no saneness.

    But in the end,
    enemy or friend,
    the shark was worth chancing.

    As it swallowed men whole,
    and struck fear into hearts,
    And I acquired it's smarts.

    See if you can guess who joey is. And no, this is not meant to offend joey.
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Fri Oct 24 2008, 23:56

    Uhm... Jose? XD Nah, good poem though Q!
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by Sasori Kung fu masta on Sun Oct 26 2008, 00:21

    Actually I think it was Jose, because "Jose" looks like "Joey" and is from Mist.

    Not to mention I automatically thought of him when reading this. xDD
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Oct 26 2008, 13:36

    awesome poem Q!!
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by quater on Sun Oct 26 2008, 13:47

    Why thank you Crispinfree. I appreciate the compliments! And yes, for those of you wondering, it was Jose. Noffense meant for Jose of course, love him, but he reminds me of Kisame, or an internet shark. Kisame being my favorite Akatsuki that is actually complimentary.
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by judai12 on Sun Oct 26 2008, 13:51

    nice Q its sooo cool^^
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Oct 26 2008, 14:43

    i see the imagery of kisame and a mixture of jose in it.
    rly awesome & the rhyming^^
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    Re: "Joey" the internet shark

    Post by quater on Sun Oct 26 2008, 14:46

    CrispinFreemanWatcher16 wrote:i see the imagery of kisame and a mixture of jose in it.
    rly awesome & the rhyming^^

    Haha. Yeah, like I said Jose reminds me of Kisame, who is an internet shark. ^_^

    Thank you Judai and Crispin. I appreciate your compliments. Though I have been told the rhyme scheme was wrought.

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