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    AtaruSabrMaster
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    Reflection

    Post by AtaruSabrMaster on Thu Oct 23 2008, 19:51

    ok. im in a band, and our singer (matt) just broke up with his gf, so i helped with the lyrics on this one. so i wrote from his POV

    REFLECTION
    Look back on life, ripples in the water.
    All you have to see of
    what's come after.
    Quiet reflection upon what has passed.
    Is all that fills my days
    mem'ries flooding back.

    No surprises for me, I've seen it all.
    No heartache or pain can
    Make my soul fall.
    I can't see love, it's too unreal to be.
    What's the point of even
    Saying you love me?

    Maybe some day, my heart will live again.
    Could I maybe find the
    One for me and
    Finally live my life happily in love.
    I doubt I'll ever know
    Could I give enough...

    tell me what u think
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    Re: Reflection

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Thu Oct 23 2008, 20:09

    good poem ataru
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    Re: Reflection

    Post by AtaruSabrMaster on Thu Oct 23 2008, 20:14

    thank you. xD

    dont worry. there's some brighter stuff coming! xD

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