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    poem #1

    Post by amaterasu on Tue Oct 07 2008, 21:10

    Who am I?
    Am this gray dead thing?
    Am I to fall by the wayside?
    Am I to continue in sin?
    what is this person here?
    who am I?

    Who am I?
    Am I this white light?
    Am I this living man without shame, humble and fearless?
    Am I this loving man, one who worships my God with all his heart?

    Who am I?
    Am I this darkness in me?
    Am I the one with the sour eyes
    The one who encourages fighting and teasing?
    The one who kills his friends, and the one who dishonors his enemies

    Am I none of the above?
    A lost soul or nothingness in the big world?
    Am I just a memory?
    Just a visual blip?

    Why can't I find who I am?
    How can it be this hard?
    but when I see your name, I am reminded of who I was,
    However the darkness steaks me back and makes me question and forget
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    Re: poem #1

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Tue Oct 07 2008, 21:19

    :O le gasp! a poem! from ama! snap!

    didn't realize you had it in you :P not bad, though
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    Re: poem #1

    Post by Temari on Tue Oct 07 2008, 21:21

    its awesome ama. ^^
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    Re: poem #1

    Post by amaterasu on Tue Oct 07 2008, 21:28

    Thank you Temari
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    Post by Temari on Wed Oct 08 2008, 17:52

    ur welcome
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    Re: poem #1

    Post by judai12 on Wed Oct 08 2008, 18:08

    its really good^^
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    Post by amaterasu on Wed Oct 08 2008, 18:59

    thank you judai
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    Re: poem #1

    Post by judai12 on Wed Oct 08 2008, 19:03

    ur welcome^^

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