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    UchihaAyame
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    Broken Heart

    Post by UchihaAyame on Wed Oct 01 2008, 02:34

    I wear my heart around my neck
    And look! Its broken
    Half A Dozen cracks and slits
    Its Bleeding, No! Crying
    Crying out for freedom
    A Heart that was once free
    Restrained by chains of autocracy
    A Dictatorial rule
    My heart, Our hearts
    Are like mirrors
    Be careful not to break
    If it breaks, its hard to fix
    If its numb
    its hard to love
    A veil of darkness covers my heart
    it builds up and darkens up my heart
    There's a tinted shade of black
    No one can come and peek
    They can't read me or what I'll do
    They will not see a thing
    Just darkness beyond our dreams


    I was really bored when I made this and I'm not good at doing poems YET. I'll come up with better ones...soon.Evil Plan
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    Re: Broken Heart

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Oct 02 2008, 18:22

    Whoo! That's a good poem ^.^
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    Re: Broken Heart

    Post by UchihaAyame on Fri Oct 03 2008, 08:07

    Thanks~! Love
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    Re: Broken Heart

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Fri Oct 03 2008, 13:16

    ^.^ No problemo ^.^
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    Re: Broken Heart

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Oct 03 2008, 18:47

    cool poem ayame^^
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    Re: Broken Heart

    Post by deidara_rocks_and_rulz49 on Sat Oct 04 2008, 09:42

    Thats a really good poem Ayame ^^

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