Cris's 12th poem

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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Sep 28 2008, 19:47

    thank you ama,cherry and pantha
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sun Sep 28 2008, 21:24

    its really good cris
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by Sayomi Hatake on Mon Sep 29 2008, 01:43

    awwwwwww soooooo cute ... I loved that line "He walks upon the path of the swaying trees
    gazing at the flowers as they dance in the cool brisk breeze" really beautiful

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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Sep 29 2008, 01:56

    thank you sayomi^^
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by Sayomi Hatake on Mon Sep 29 2008, 02:00

    np :D
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by Aichu on Mon Sep 29 2008, 21:18

    Cool ^_^ I like narrative poems. It's always neat to here a story in poetry- they are often very beautiful. Like ama said, the detail and imagery is beautiful.

    (psst, it's 'wandering past'!)
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Sep 29 2008, 21:26

    thank you^^
    yea i forgot to fix that part "past".
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by Kiami on Mon Sep 29 2008, 21:49

    serious amazing
    job there Cris. ^-^
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Sep 29 2008, 23:26

    thanks kia^^
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by theBOSS. on Tue Sep 30 2008, 22:52

    Who's hinoya?
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    Re: Cris's 12th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Sep 30 2008, 22:56

    the girl in the poem

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