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Cris's 12th poem
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awwwwwww soooooo cute ... I loved that line "He walks upon the path of the swaying trees
gazing at the flowers as they dance in the cool brisk breeze" really beautiful

gazing at the flowers as they dance in the cool brisk breeze" really beautiful

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thank you sayomi^^
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Cool ^_^ I like narrative poems. It's always neat to here a story in poetry- they are often very beautiful. Like ama said, the detail and imagery is beautiful.
(psst, it's 'wandering past'!)
(psst, it's 'wandering past'!)
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thank you^^
yea i forgot to fix that part "past".
yea i forgot to fix that part "past".
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thanks kia^^
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the girl in the poem