My Friend's Poem

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    PeinQAkatsuki
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    My Friend's Poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Fri Sep 26 2008, 23:15

    I'm falling.

    The ground seems to be flying up to meet me,

    At least someone wants to great me.

    I'm sinking.

    The water is so cold,

    Waves over head have rolled.

    They pass me by as others passed.

    The memories croud in my mind they have massed.

    They say your life flashes before you're eyes when you die.

    My life is so pathetic, i don't think i'll even cry.

    The sand of the floor is so soft,

    The water is so cold,

    I think i'll take a breath,

    And give death on me a hold.


    That, my friends, is made of awesome!
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Sep 26 2008, 23:29

    ooh i luv the rhymin rly awesome
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    Re: My Friend's Poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Fri Sep 26 2008, 23:32

    Yay I'll let her know ^.^
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    Re: My Friend's Poem

    Post by Kitaro on Sat Sep 27 2008, 01:54

    yeah its a good poem congrats to your friend
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    Re: My Friend's Poem

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Sat Sep 27 2008, 13:40

    dude that was so awesome. i liked how it ryhmed.
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    Re: My Friend's Poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Sat Sep 27 2008, 14:14

    Yay she'll be so happy people like it ^.^

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