Pain's Grace

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    PeinQAkatsuki
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    Pain's Grace

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Sep 25 2008, 20:27

    Shes there with that same old killing headache,
    This is only dull pain compared to her heartache.
    She longed for love and comfort all her life,
    Now she sits and watches this so called life
    Flash by her weary eyes, she cries.
    She knows the end has come, no more lies.
    What was life worth anyways?
    Just those times, those yesteryears somedays.
    She wants to be whole again, but never can.
    She was broken too many times by the hand
    Of her only lover, it broke her down until there
    Was nothing left to break, and under her matted hair,
    She remembers.
    She remembers everything that broke her down.
    The tears smear her carefully done makeup... she was found.
    She was found lying on her floor with the beer.
    The note was there saying loud and clear,
    I tried to drink my pain away, but now Im gone,
    And Im still trying to figure out what went wrong.
    Where would I go if I knew what I know now?
    No tears were shed for her, no one cared for her then and now.
    No one will ever notice that she died.
    No one will notice that she cried and cried.
    Pretend that we dont exist, she said.
    Pretend we dont exist and forget our bloodshed.
    Suck the blood from my veins.
    Watch me bleed down dead and slain.
    Would you turn around to care?
    Would you turn around to even care...
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    Re: Pain's Grace

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Thu Sep 25 2008, 20:32

    amazing poem pein!!
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    Re: Pain's Grace

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Sep 25 2008, 20:35

    Thanks ^.^ It was just kinda spur of the moment with inspiration kinda thing.
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    Re: Pain's Grace

    Post by Banouin on Thu Sep 25 2008, 20:48

    Its fine, Not bad, But Can I vote Whatever anyway :3 I am just so used to saying it, xP
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    Re: Pain's Grace

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Sep 25 2008, 20:57

    Sure, I don't mind. ^.^
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    Re: Pain's Grace

    Post by Banouin on Thu Sep 25 2008, 21:00

    Yay, anyway good job XD
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    Re: Pain's Grace

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Thu Sep 25 2008, 21:06

    Thanks, after my inspiration left my high and dry for two weeks, I thought it wasn't that bad either.

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