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    Post by amaterasu on Mon Sep 15 2008, 19:12

    Little Jimmy was walking home one day. Since he lived close to his school, he was never late. His attendance and marks were really high and he was the captain of a couple sports teams and clubs, he lived a nice life, no drugs, parties, or alcohol. One day Little Jimmy was walking to school as usual when he met up with a class mate of his, Butter. She had a hot air balloon beside her and invited Little Jimmy to go on a hot air balloon adventure with her. He accepted and climbed in the air balloon with her, and they lifted up off the ground. They flew over the city and then over the country side. In the middle of their voyage Butter had a catastrophic heart attack. She died. Little Jimmy didn't know what to do, he had never flown a hot air balloon before and he was secretly afraid of being underwater.
    First thing he did was he threw Butter's body over the edge of the hot air balloon and watched her fall down on a farm house. Suddenly a giant white dragon came out of nowhere and ate a giant apple and asked Little Jimmy what he was doing. Little Jimmy said he was trying to do a triathlon and then he was going back to school. The Dragon asked if he needed help and Little Jimmy said no, but before he could speak The Dragon ate him and the hot air balloon and spat his towards his school. He crashed through his classroom roof to find his class mate constipated and unable to speak palatinate. So Little Jimmy infected them with a deadly zombie virus then ran around the school screaming I got a frog in my pants!!!
    No one believed him but instead got eaten by the zombies.
    The zombies then surrounded Little Jimmy but the principal pulled out the admin gun from Half life two gmod and defeated the smokers and also the zombies and the locker monsters. However one zombie survived and started a band with Little Jimmy, the principle and a flying whale. They became a huge name in the music industry but they all died on a plane crash to the moon, but not the zombie, he was already dead.


    The End


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    Re: improve story

    Post by Aichu on Mon Sep 15 2008, 19:52

    ...

    The warrant for your restraining order is in the mail.
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    Re: improve story

    Post by judai12 on Mon Sep 15 2008, 20:15

    very good^^
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    Re: improve story

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Mon Sep 15 2008, 21:24

    XD that made me laugh
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    Re: improve story

    Post by judai12 on Mon Sep 15 2008, 21:57

    ok^^
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    Re: improve story

    Post by amaterasu on Mon Sep 15 2008, 22:23

    I got the Idea of doing an improve session to cure my boredness in grade 7 which a series called pomme, It made no sense
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    Re: improve story

    Post by quater on Mon Sep 15 2008, 22:34

    Please say don't say improve again...Cause it's improv.

    Also you should add a poll so I can put up my grade ^_^
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    Re: improve story

    Post by amaterasu on Tue Sep 16 2008, 15:31

    improv appears to bot be a word on my computer
    maybe it's different spelling in the States
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    Re: improve story

    Post by quater on Tue Sep 16 2008, 18:42

    It's true but Improv isn't a word in real life but it's what you mean
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    Re: improve story

    Post by amaterasu on Tue Sep 16 2008, 18:51

    really?
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    Re: improve story

    Post by quater on Tue Sep 16 2008, 18:59

    I don't think it is because technically it's the shorthand for Improvisation
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    Re: improve story

    Post by judai12 on Tue Sep 16 2008, 19:15

    it really really good^^
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    Re: improve story

    Post by amaterasu on Tue Sep 16 2008, 19:25

    thanks I guess
    Improv? is that right Quater?

    well Improv is something that is supposed to be enjoyed and not taken seriously
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    Re: improve story

    Post by quater on Tue Sep 16 2008, 19:46

    Yes but I couldn't get past Improve because improve and Improv look nothing alike.

    Guess it's an OCD or something ^_^
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    Re: improve story

    Post by amaterasu on Tue Sep 16 2008, 20:00

    I never actually thought about typing improv
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    Re: improve story

    Post by judai12 on Wed Sep 17 2008, 16:36

    hey guys^^
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    Re: improve story

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Tue Sep 23 2008, 11:24

    I liked it! XD

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