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    My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Sep 09 2008, 16:22

    here i go

    music in your ears
    wrists crying red tears
    its been so many years
    since
    i've seen you smile

    you gave to me a crimson rose
    through choked
    screams
    through everything
    on that cold winters day

    i'm sorry i
    made you sad
    that i became so mad
    i'm sorry for everything
    i feel so
    bad

    the life you wanted
    wasn't what i could give
    i couldn't tell
    you
    i was to scared to lose you

    we walked away from each other
    on
    that cold winters day
    and now we are miles apart
    and wishing we had stayed

    like it?
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Temari on Tue Sep 09 2008, 16:25

    ur way better than judai. no offense judai.
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Sep 09 2008, 16:26

    Temari wrote:ur way better than judai. no offense judai.
    sweet thank u

    -in head - much offense judai xD
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Tue Sep 09 2008, 18:55

    Awesome! I don't write poems exactly like that, but mine do deal with depression. I do have one lying around about razor blades though I think.
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Sep 09 2008, 19:56

    PeinQAkatsuki wrote:Awesome! I don't write poems exactly like that, but mine do deal with depression. I do have one lying around about razor blades though I think.
    cool i am only good at emo peoms weird O__o
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Tue Sep 09 2008, 20:01

    wow this poem is awesome. It's sad though.
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Sep 09 2008, 20:05

    Thank u im only good at emo peoms ^_^
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Tue Sep 09 2008, 20:14

    how did u get the words to ryhme and go with the poem?
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Sep 09 2008, 20:18

    lots of thought it took me about 2 days it was hard >_<
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Wed Sep 10 2008, 22:08

    Temari wrote:ur way better than judai. no offense judai.

    WHAT! I'M WAY BETTER THEN HIM! YOU JUST LIKE SHRIO AND HATE ME!
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Thu Sep 11 2008, 17:23

    yup :P
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Temari on Thu Sep 11 2008, 17:37

    judai12 wrote:
    Temari wrote:ur way better than judai. no offense judai.

    WHAT! I'M WAY BETTER THEN HIM! YOU JUST LIKE SHRIO AND HATE ME!
    no. his poem seemed really good. my opinion.
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Thu Sep 11 2008, 18:41

    whatever i am sooo sick of u guys
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Temari on Thu Sep 11 2008, 19:02

    that means u hate us. :D
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Thu Sep 11 2008, 19:49

    no i dont hate u guys
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Thu Sep 11 2008, 20:09

    Temari wrote:that means u hate us. :D
    Now i see why tems emo Emo Corner
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Thu Sep 11 2008, 22:30

    STOP IT BOTH OF U!
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Fri Sep 12 2008, 18:18

    but *this is the song that never ends , yes it goes on and on my friends , some people started singing it not knowing what is was,
    and thell countinue singing it forever just because..... :repeat: *
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Fri Sep 12 2008, 20:17

    shrio stop or you'll die!!!
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Fri Sep 12 2008, 20:19

    no cuz it the ................................................................. song that never ends , yes it goes on and on my friends , some people started singing it not knowing what is was,
    and thell countinue singing it forever just because..... :repeat: *
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Fri Sep 12 2008, 20:36

    whatever
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by Little_Shiro on Fri Sep 12 2008, 20:42

    wait its not done cuz its the song that never ends , yes it goes on and on my friends , some people started singing it not knowing what is was,
    and thell countinue singing it forever just because..... :repeat: *
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    Re: My emo peom

    Post by judai12 on Fri Sep 12 2008, 20:45

    stop plz i'm not in the mood

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