Temi's 7th poem

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    Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Temari on Mon Sep 08 2008, 18:32

    I didnt give this one title cuz I just thought of it.


    Sitting,waiting
    Waiting while time ticks by
    Slowly it starts to stop
    Slower and slower
    Sitting on a swing in the middle of a park
    Looking at the ground
    Tears shedding
    Tears falling from her face
    Her heart broken once more
    Playing the memories in her head
    Trying to make them go away
    But couldn't
    All she wanted was a happy ending
    But all she got was a nightmare.
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Mon Sep 08 2008, 18:34

    wow it's good.
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Temari on Mon Sep 08 2008, 18:36

    u really think so?

    Thanks. It just came to me when I was thinking I should make a new poem. ^^
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Little_Shiro on Tue Sep 09 2008, 16:02

    I think its great ^_^
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Temari on Tue Sep 09 2008, 16:04

    thank u. It came to me when I was thinking. judai says I'm not allowed to think anymore but I do anyways. xD
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Wed Sep 10 2008, 22:11

    will u stop saying that temi! i like the poem temi
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Temari on Thu Sep 11 2008, 17:19

    but u did say that. :D

    and thank u.
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by judai12 on Thu Sep 11 2008, 17:19

    your welcome
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Temari on Sat Sep 13 2008, 23:25

    okay.
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Dancing Mist on Sat Sep 13 2008, 23:27

    Awww that was cute *huggles*
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Little_Shiro on Sat Sep 13 2008, 23:31

    all of your peoms have to do something about crying
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

    Post by Temari on Sun Sep 14 2008, 01:01

    thank u onee-chan. -hugs back-
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    Re: Temi's 7th poem

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