Crispin's 11th short poem

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    Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Sep 01 2008, 21:51

    Tears

    Looking upon the ocean as my turn of fate
    staring desolately into my full mind of state
    drifting away like the sands of a lost beach
    I turn to you lost like that of flickering light
    You forgive for the things that have been unleashed awrath upon you

    I feel as though theres no escape from this villain of regret
    your haunting the deep compartments underseeking in my heart
    i want to tear you from my soul and forget your existence's start
    but "regret"..you burrow your way taking me down like the thrashing waves
    Tears stain deep in my skin like a deep sin that has marked me of myself
    Its hard to forgive...feeling the lust pain of those horrible filled moments
    but its painful like the dead memories of your past to forget..
    Seeking enclosure looking for a guardian to call protection
    I search only to see that you are that reflection...
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by Kitaro on Mon Sep 01 2008, 22:12

    the poem may be short but ive written shorter

    your still one of the best poets cris
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Sep 01 2008, 22:20

    thank you
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by Kitaro on Mon Sep 01 2008, 22:23

    just statin the facts
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by NarutoBoyFreakah on Tue Sep 02 2008, 04:20

    awesome cris! =D
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Sep 02 2008, 13:51

    thanks nbf
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by Choushi on Tue Sep 02 2008, 14:02

    that was awesome!!!
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Sep 02 2008, 14:09

    thank you choushi!!!
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by tsuki_uchiha on Tue Sep 02 2008, 16:51

    i liked it. your one of the best poets out there. Your poems ROCK.
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Sep 02 2008, 17:07

    thank you tsuki^^
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by sabaku no ketsueki on Tue Sep 02 2008, 17:54

    really good. seriously, one of the best
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    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Sep 02 2008, 17:55

    thank you saba
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Tue Sep 02 2008, 17:56

    Oh gosh, it's so pretty.

    Nice Again :D
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Sep 02 2008, 18:12

    thanks keya^^
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Thu Sep 04 2008, 00:50

    OH SHIT! This is thes BEST one!!!! Its AMAZING Onee-chan O_o

    I love this one most!
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by Kitaro on Thu Sep 04 2008, 17:06

    one of the best cris Oh Yeah!
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Sep 07 2008, 20:57

    thanks kitaro
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by judai12 on Sun Sep 07 2008, 21:09

    sooo sad i love it
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Sep 07 2008, 21:13

    thank you judai
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    Re: Crispin's 11th short poem

    Post by judai12 on Sun Sep 07 2008, 21:21

    your welcome cris

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