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    sciency poem thing

    Post by Kitaro on Wed Aug 27 2008, 17:34

    the feeling of intelligence
    being sentient
    being intelligent
    personality,thought,adaptability,science
    so branches life and from that every possibility
    everything spoken or given or taken is possible
    every person every planet every alien is its own code its own body
    whether its mind is sentien,free,controlled,nothing each body takes up life
    each thing can and will serve a purpose


    time allows movment and passage in a way like a boat on the sea or a car on the road with intelligence comes theory and opinion thus leading eventually to judgment causing tension (bloodshed) and counterthoughts distraction all beings of the mind and body are distracted by thought and judment leading to the final end...death

    post any comments whether they are good bad or critical
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Wed Aug 27 2008, 17:59

    it was some what confusing in the first part.
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by Kitaro on Wed Aug 27 2008, 18:03

    well it was kind of just raw unrefined thoughts
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by Kugutsu_Kokuo on Wed Aug 27 2008, 21:10

    I liked the first part. The second was more of a speech not a poem.
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by Kitaro on Wed Aug 27 2008, 21:23

    so i have mixed opinions coming in
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Thu Aug 28 2008, 18:48

    good kitaro good
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by Kitaro on Thu Aug 28 2008, 19:03

    thx james
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    Post by King_Of_Blades on Thu Aug 28 2008, 19:08

    yw bro
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    Post by judai12 on Thu Aug 28 2008, 19:39

    i like it it is sooo cool^^
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    Re: sciency poem thing

    Post by Kitaro on Thu Aug 28 2008, 20:51

    thx judai

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