My Good for nothing fic XD

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    My Good for nothing fic XD

    Post by Sayomi Hatake on Tue Aug 26 2008, 23:52

    I wrote this a long time ago and well I duno tell me if its any good...
    Encounter Part:
    one

    An
    ominous, chilling silence had fallen over the area and the still
    humid sticky air clung to her heavy body. Her breath was faint as she
    quietly rested under the giant oak tree.“Hey--
    she’s over here,” a young man with glasses spoke as he observed
    her with his dark eyes.“So
    she sleeps, huh?” a muscular, dark skinned man spoke and carelessly
    walked to the motionless woman.“Umm…that…”He
    was cut off when a brisk voice snapped, “Shut up! She’s out;
    don’t give me crap! You got it, kid.”“Yeah.
    Sure,” the boy mumbled and looked over at the third man. He was
    pale in complexion, with black hair and burning red eyes. He seemed
    to be the leader (or at least the most respected man) of the group.
    Whether that was because of his strength or seemingly deadly essence,
    one might never know.It
    was still midday, but these ninja had grown careless-- so obsessed
    with pursuing something they had forgotten that they were unwelcome
    guests…not only the Forest of Death, but the Leaf Village as well.
    The dark man used his dirty shoe to turn the women over; her face was
    that of the dead, a cold white color, and her eyes half open had lost
    their youthful glisten. Yet her smoky green eyes followed the man’s
    shoe to his face.“We’ve
    got you now…I do believe we will be paid well tonight; don’t you
    think so, Kabuto?” the man said, and looked over at the
    white-haired boy with glasses behind him.She
    can’t be taken down so easily-- even if that poison was powerful.
    As long as she is breathing, she can still bite, Kabuto thought to
    himself and adjusted his glasses.“Raiden…don’t
    underestimate her,” Kabuto warned.“Kabuto’s
    right. Don’t be so hasty to find your grave.” The pale man looked
    cruelly at the women with his blood-stained eyes. Raiden let out an
    irritated snarl and pushed his right heel into the woman’s gut. The
    woman groaned, rolling her face to the cold ground as she coughed up
    a mouthful of blood. Raiden chuckled and removed his foot, an evil
    sneer crossing his face.“Don’t
    even think about it,” the red eyed man snapped. “She is my wife;
    only I will be given the luxury of killing her.”“If
    you want it so bad, just go into town…I'm sure you can find--”
    Kabuto started.“Enough!”
    Hitoshi shouted. “Bring her. We're going.”Raiden
    hesitated but bent down to pick the girl up; he knew he was no match
    for the medical ninja or Hitoshi, the red eyed man. Suddenly a loud
    cry rang overhead along with an obnoxious gagging noise and the
    intense cracking of bone. The two men looked back to see their
    partner being strangled like a rabbit between a wolf’s teeth. The
    women had used her last bit of strength and bit down on the man’s
    throat.Kabuto
    looked at the scene in complete horror. If she can do this after she
    was like that…what the hell is she? and her chakra...Hitoshi
    jumped at the sight but quickly calmed himself and began walking
    over, when he felt the woman's body heat up with a sudden increment of
    chakra, he stopped.“So
    the drug is wearing off already?” Hitoshi mumbled, astounded, and
    glowered at the woman exuding the over-bearing amount of chakra.“It
    looks that way. We know where she is, let’s retreat for now.”
    Kabuto ordered. Hitoshi nodded and the two disappeared with a poof of
    smoke.The
    woman opened her eyes and found that the air around her was going
    cold as the sun set. She releases her prey and and stands.“What
    happened?” she mumbled as her body began to shake with nervous
    jitters. She looked at the corpse sprawled at her feet. The man’s
    eyes were still wide open glazed with fear. She let out a loud scream
    and ran her hands to her face.“Stop,
    calm down,” she murmured to herself. “It’s done, it doesn’t
    matter.” She shook her head violently and pulled at her
    blood-stained hair, attempting to stop herself from accepting what
    she had done. Releasing the splattered locks she let her hands fall
    to her sides and took in a deep breath trying to regain her
    composure. "One…two…three…four…five…" she
    counted, taking comfort in the systematic order, and swiftly walked
    away.She
    soon came upon a large red building and climbed to the top for a good
    look around. The building seemed to be placed in the middle of a vast
    dense forest, which suddenly stopped as if fenced off and not allowed
    to spread as a natural forest should. This also gave it an equal
    distance all the way around. She switched her gaze and watched the
    painful lush of the evening sun as it sank over the giant trees. The
    woman closed her eyes for a brief second before opening them again.So
    I really am here…I hope he's alright. the woman thought and pressed
    her fingers to her forehead, slowly massaging as if to rub away a
    headache. "Why can’t I remember anything? What did I do to
    that man? Why? Why? Why…?" she started with a yell, but
    quickly faded into a mumble of distress. With a sigh she laid her
    tense body against the tarnished red roof and tried to relax herself
    on the sun-heated plates of the rooftop. Her body began to shake
    again as the chilling cold air licked at her body. The sun was gone
    and darkness quickly consumed her."Looks
    like I'm stuck here for now." she spoke to herself. She stood
    up, took a last look over the area before disappearing behind a
    broken window.
    So should I post more???
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    Re: My Good for nothing fic XD

    Post by Kitaro on Tue Aug 26 2008, 23:56

    what was this fic of
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    Re: My Good for nothing fic XD

    Post by Sayomi Hatake on Wed Aug 27 2008, 00:00

    Its a naruto fanfic lol
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    Re: My Good for nothing fic XD

    Post by Kitaro on Wed Aug 27 2008, 00:02

    oh i just kind of skimmed i guess i missed the obvious but what i read was good
    keep writing your doing fine

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