In our Dying and Living States (poem)

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    In our Dying and Living States (poem)

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Mon Aug 25 2008, 20:46

    Inspiration is here!

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    Dying to live, that's something people don't seem to say,
    They don't think about it, but we live to die someday,
    We're all blessed and cursed with the same exact fate,
    But who's to say that we can't forget our dying state.
    Sure we die, we live, we die, and we live again,
    But when we die for the last time, we enter in again
    To a world where nothing is wrong and all is peaceful,
    Where there is love and happiness, and no one is hateful.
    When we die, it's only a new beginning, a beginning of peace,
    And there's nothing we can do to stop it or make a crease
    In society's number one concern and relief
    We die, we live, we die, and we live again in peace.
    So when you die, you really are alive, just in another way,
    And when you live in another way, you breathe in another way,
    And you seem to be forgiving of everything that happened before,
    And what could we ask for except for anything more
    Than what we are given, we don't choose our life,
    We can choose the outcome of our everlasting strife.
    But we can't choose or change the inevitable fate
    Of what will happen to us when we die to live, in our dying state.
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    Re: In our Dying and Living States (poem)

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Aug 25 2008, 20:59

    its rly cool poem pein..reminds me of christian faith in ur poem. very awesome rhyming poem.
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    Re: In our Dying and Living States (poem)

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Mon Aug 25 2008, 21:00

    Thankies ^.^ I just got inspiration from the song "In this World (Murder)" and how people really just live to die.

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