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    Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 16 2008, 18:52

    Tie of Compassion

    I stand there and here looking upon your face..
    you became one of my closes friends...immediately we linked to each other like the ocean touching the morning sand...
    this feelings i feel are so strong..it feels unbearing at times
    this tie of brotherly and sisterly compassion..wow its beyond the deep confines our hearts
    You make me shine in ways that no one has ever entered..or reached with their bear hands

    You think of me as perfect..oh how that really blesses down on my soul from the sun...
    I see you blossom into such a great guy..this compassionate person inside you..
    I thank you..for releasing this special part of you to me
    My soul flows like river with a never ending release of calmness
    I hold those special moments..strapping and tying them into my mind..like trying to capture the light...
    I only get it in parts..like a puzzle of life

    You make my heart smile in this tie of compassion
    my soul welcomes you..a drifting spirit lost but full of love instead of ration
    Brother...you extract the good things of me...with so much care to even spare
    All i can do is stare with a look of ease
    You see me and say please
    Our blood runs thicker than any vein in our body can possibly hold..
    you say i make you smile is what I was told
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by Titaniumxvx on Sat Aug 16 2008, 19:27

    Wow, this describes the brother/Sister relationship perfectly.

    Wow. Amazing Poem. Awesome, Crispin!
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by AtaruSabrMaster on Sat Aug 16 2008, 19:45

    i love it ^_^
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Aug 16 2008, 19:52

    i love it too
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Aug 16 2008, 20:40

    OMG CRIS.i love it it is soooooo good^^
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by knssquad on Sat Aug 16 2008, 21:25

    nice
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sat Aug 16 2008, 21:26

    no its better then nice.its coool
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by Claud-kun on Sat Aug 16 2008, 21:29

    Great poem Cris. So sweet ^_^
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 16 2008, 21:31

    thank you all^__^
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by PeinQAkatsuki on Sat Aug 16 2008, 22:19

    It's great! I have no inspiration for anything, I think I smoked it all out O__O Jk, no I don't smoke. As far as I know...
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by Laura-Chan on Sun Aug 17 2008, 16:13

    wow, this poem is so Compassionate and loving, it's like, warming to read ^_^
    I love the Simarlies used, like 'like the ocean touching the morning sand' that's my favorite line!

    Great Work, amazing Poem, Poet :P
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Aug 17 2008, 16:25

    thanks laura^^*nods*
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sun Aug 17 2008, 16:56

    cris it one of your best poems.i could never be as good as writer as u
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sun Aug 17 2008, 16:58

    sure you can judai, i'm not the greatest poet out there. i'm amateur but enjoy writing the poems a lot no matter what. i can express myself so much through them.
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Sun Aug 17 2008, 17:02

    but u r the best.^^
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Sun Aug 17 2008, 23:50

    I LOVE IT
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by MissQoolKat on Sun Aug 17 2008, 23:57

    Aw, Cris... It's great! I love it! How do you come up with such brilliant topics? I love all yer poems! :D
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Aug 18 2008, 00:00

    thanks kat^^ inspirations just comes to me so i start writing
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Mon Aug 18 2008, 00:06

    ive had it once but thats it
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Aug 18 2008, 00:10

    thanks kitaro
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Mon Aug 18 2008, 00:12

    your right cris
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Mon Aug 18 2008, 00:14

    i'm right about what?
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Mon Aug 18 2008, 00:29

    i forgot sorry
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Tue Aug 19 2008, 00:04

    ok??
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    Re: Cris's 10th poem

    Post by judai12 on Tue Aug 19 2008, 00:23

    love the poem^^

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