Crispin's 9th poem

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    Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:02

    Slipping

    Wandering into the hazy maze
    I look for myself, for I have lost my gaze
    Pushing forward like the windwordly skies
    using all my energy to stay up in this spot...
    closeness...I don't want to lose it...
    Feeling tremendous pressure on me
    I pounce forth wanting to stay up...

    I don't want to be left behind
    where i feel misguided and undivine...
    My mind is lost on the quickness of your pace
    why can't I keep up with you anymore...?
    My mind races on all these thoughts and questions
    Will I be able to accomplish the goals that are glued...
    to my conscience...

    I see you there...helping me out of the rubble
    your there for me and I couldn't be any more thankful
    You lend a hand to me telling..."stay strong"...I wrap my thoughts around staying strong...but can I really be that strong??
    You showed me strength and it guides my soul...to become better and believe..."thank you, Maria"
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:03

    from the heart to the pen but in this case from the heart and the soul to the fingers and the keyboard ending up in a poem about losing ones self
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Angelic Harmony on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:05

    God. Im suck into your poems Onee-chan. Sad but so beautiful like always.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:06

    *smiles*thank u kitaro.
    it first came frm teh heart to the pen and paper..and then i put it on here.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:07

    then my theory was wrong for once
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 02:11

    thank you anna,^_^ yeah this one is sad in a way.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Temari on Fri Aug 01 2008, 11:28

    thats an awesome poem cris. Better than my poems.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by AtaruSabrMaster on Fri Aug 01 2008, 11:45

    O.o

    i love the poem cris XD
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Claud-kun on Fri Aug 01 2008, 13:08

    Nice one Cris!
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 13:15

    thank u!! claud
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by judai12 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 14:05

    OMG! cris one of your best ^^
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 14:12

    thank you judai^^
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by judai12 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 14:15

    welcome^^
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Aichu on Fri Aug 01 2008, 22:19

    A beautiful thank you ^_^ Tis' lovely, Crisp.

    May I ask what the word 'windwordly' means, though? XD
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Fri Aug 01 2008, 22:21

    Aichu wrote:A beautiful thank you ^_^ Tis' lovely, Crisp.

    May I ask what the word 'windwordly' means, though? XD

    i spelled it wrong, and was kinda tired frm a race last night.
    like wind wardly..idk if thats right either.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by KarateKeyaQ on Sat Aug 02 2008, 00:33

    I thought windwordly was a word..?

    ANywho, nice one ^^ Better then any poem I can do. Good Job Mrs. Poet :DD
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 02 2008, 00:37

    i thought windwordly was too NF. idk..

    thank you, i'm sure you can write good poems too NF.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by Kitaro on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:11

    now time for a tenth soon i hope
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:13

    yeah, as soon as inspiration reaches me.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:13

    theirs a 10th already and fantatisc poem crispin
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:17

    thank u james, no no tenth one yet.
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:18

    o thought oh well
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by CrispinFreemanWatcher16 on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:22

    it will come to me james^^

    read my 8th one^^
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by King_Of_Blades on Sat Aug 02 2008, 02:25

    k i will after i Snooze going to bed now
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    Re: Crispin's 9th poem

    Post by GL on Sat Aug 02 2008, 17:23

    wow, this is one of my favorites! :D

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